Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, the youth have placed a premium on imitating celebrities and renowned people compared to previous generation. Although a plenty of people advocate that youngsters are not following the famous people’s notions, others hold opposite perspective. I profoundly subscribe to this consensus that claims young people are pursuing famous people ‘s perspectives in comparison with previous generation. There are several reasons, two of which will be explained in the ensuing essay.
The first paramount reason I should mention is that the social media has great numbers of critical effects on young people’ behaviors. It is of importance that young people follow celebrities lives on social media such as Instagram to match the needs of fast-changing and competitive society. They are of the opinion that it is mandatory to imitate celebrities or athletes’ attire, behavior, beliefs, or notions. Furthermore, emulating their lives affect young people’s lives without noticing it. So easy access is social media in modern world that actually encourages new generation copies famous people’s perspectives.
Another noteworthy and exquisite reason comes to my mind is that previous generation would rather follow people who had critical and integral influence on the society. In the past people were pursuing those people who were versatile, knowledgeable, or accomplished. In addition, they preferred taking in essential information by following plenty of adept people, but now young people, to keep abreast of latest events, would rather solely follow an array of people such as athletes even if they are not impeccable idols. For instance, in the past people were always aware about the latest alternations in their society, while now the youth prefer not being oblivious about their favorite actors’ brand new cars. As a result, young generations waste their valuable time following invaluable events.
All in all, because of the influences of social media and a reduction in young people’s interest to pursue informative or useful information; they exclusively show a tendency to pursue celebrities and athletes’ notions.
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- TPO 46 Integrated Writing Task 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 402, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
..., but now young people, to keep abreast of latest events, would rather solely follow an a...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, furthermore, if, so, while, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1829.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 325.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62769230769 4.8611393121 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94405428301 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572307692308 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2296207131 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.933333333 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271277109707 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967496971983 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498950170838 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168151299404 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302317493548 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 11.7677419355 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 10.9000537634 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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