Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past.
No one can cast doubt on the fact that education plays a dominant role in children’s lives, which whenever parents recently or in the past all truly concern. It has induced a keenly debated issue as to which era of parents have more concentration on their children. Some are adamant that parents nowadays are devoted more than past decades were to the children’s education, while the others squarely hold the opposite perspective. My view is that parents today involve more in their children’s education. More reasons will be shed light on as follows.
First and foremost, parents nowadays expect their children can find a high-salary job in the future since the commodity price skyrocket radically. It is education that may result in a far-reaching consequence what job their children find. Thus, although their children do not talent in a specific field such as electronics or computers, many parents may force them to learn this knowledge and professional skills. For instance, my friend who fairly unlike physics and mathematics when he was in high school, but his mother insists he enters the electronics engineering department which commonly has a high salary in work. His mother even implores him to comply with her suggestion just only her wishful thinking. It can easily find that parents nowadays may involve in their children’s education in this example.
In addition, an escalating number of parents can afford more extra sources of education for their children in recent years. It is because that the whole economy level has enhanced in most countries and the salary also increase too. Parents can spend their money on cultivating their children, which lets their children to cram schools to increase their competitiveness. Taiwan is an obvious example of this situation. None of the high school students has ever studied in cram schools, which they learn additional knowledge. Although cram school costs almost ten thousand dollars per month, parents are still willing to spend their money.
Finally, with the education universalized, many parents are already educated by high education so that they can cope with many problems which puzzle their children. Mathematic questions and homework, which are seen as a difficult subject in most students, can be answered by parents. Thus, many parents who have the ability to teach their kids may spend some time studying and reading with their kids. For instance, I usually ask my mother for some math homework that I can not solve by myself. She always can deal with easily because she graduated with Mathematics Master.
In conclusion, parents pay more effort on children’s education in today's. No matter what the way they use such as helping to decide the department in the college, giving kids to cram schools, or accompanying with kids when they study, they all really love their kids.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, really, so, still, thus, while, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2397.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 466.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14377682403 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70094961957 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523605150215 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 718.2 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0272522366 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.875 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4166666667 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37719983954 0.236089414692 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120557909283 0.076458572812 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103171037209 0.0737576698707 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22281113518 0.150856017488 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0835439343481 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 86.8835125448 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.