Do you agree or disagree with the following statement
People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.
In today's modern and hectic life, going on a trip may be beneficial for peaple to get distance from their convoluted routine life and take a rest for a while. Controversy exists over whether travelling abroad or searching through own's country is of more helpful features. In my vantage point, although these two choices have their own advantages and disadvantages, going outside of country has some advantages which may outweigh it's drawbacks because not only can people get accustomed to assortments of cultures, but it may help people to extend their job oppurtunity.
The first vital point to bear in mind is that with the advent of travelling sophisticated technology, it has been more convenient than the past to travel abroad.The world in which all of individuals are living in contains a variety of different cultures .Travelling to outside of country lead every one to be familiar with these cultures. To put it into more details, every individual is able to benefit from one of the most beauty things of this world which is distant behaviors and customs of people. Additionally, having been familiar with some other customs and their traditional foods for example, people are able to socialize more and find more friends in order to spend times with because they are of sufficient information to share with each other and talk about. For instance, take the case of a man who is inherently predisposed to visit different country as his rest time. the more countries he visits, the more he is familiar with people with different sights and the more he is able to cultivate new relationships. Therefore, it is not surprising if he is more successful in social programs which need a powerful ability to share information with culturally different people.
The second noteworthy reason is that having a constant job will not lead a person to be financially prosperous because again the internet and modern technologies around the world have altered jobs. In today's life, a person with a mundane job which only require one skill will not called a succsessful man. bussiness markets in this era need a human with a lot of information and being familiar with different languages. In addition, in order for companies to benefit more and win market competitions, it is more beneficial for them to hire a multi cultural trader with an ability to socialize with different cultures. Therefore, all of these abilities will not be achieved unless a person has been in more countries and has extended his international knowledge. As an illustration, take the case of a man who tends to work for an international well-known company. He may not be accepted until he has had several profits for the company. If he has linked some ways with different country, he undoubtly will benefit the owner. But if he has not, presumably his chance to get that job offer is not sufficiently much.
All in all, going on an outside trip will have more beneficial implications for every one than inside trips since in this way, people can be familiar with several cultures and they can extend their knowledge which leads them to have more chance to get their favourite jobs.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 83.0 52.1666666667 159% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2628.0 1977.66487455 133% => OK
No of words: 533.0 407.700716846 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93058161351 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80487177365 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81516933366 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.450281425891 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 838.8 618.680645161 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.8351470565 48.9658058833 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.315789474 100.406767564 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0526315789 20.6045352989 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251507362613 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797854855333 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063803463605 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164746730216 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072049399417 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 11.7677419355 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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