Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People now can better protect the environment than they could in the past.
In my opinion, every conin has two sides, different people will give different answers to this question from their own characters, emotional concerns and educational backgrounds. However, when it comes to me, I agree with the opint that people now can better protect the environment than they could in the past. The are several reasons to illustrate this view as follows. To begin with, the main reason is that people know what they need to do now. Why I say this is because that peaople in a stressful situation, everyone needs food and space to live, and the environment is the most important thing in these facts. For example, if we do not keep our surroundings clearn, and we have a bad life environment, therefore, we know what we need, and people will try their best to protect the environment to keep life comfortable. Furthermore, my another view is that people have more and more money to protect the environment. As you know, lots of money can create some tools and techonolgies, so we can better clean our city. For instance, in my family, we keep out our wast water to the river, but we clean it and drill it into a particuler pipe now. Last but not least,each of the world's counries' government take some measures to protect the environment, the environment problem become a hot topic in the world, and every county want to do something to protect the environment. Just take an example, in my country, my government take a measure named refuse classification, it is a big step to dispose the city's rubish. There is no city to do this in the past in my country. All in all, according to these reasons abovel can illustrate my point that people no can better protect the environment than they could in the past.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement People now can better protect the environment than they could in the past 70
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...nvironment than they could in the past. The are several reasons to illustrate this view...
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Message: Did you mean 'our'?
Suggestion: our
...ty. For instance, in my family, we keep out our wast water to the river, but we cle...
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Suggestion: , each
... particuler pipe now. Last but not least,each of the worlds counries government take ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, you know, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62745098039 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73415184526 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52614379085 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2134898346 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.923076923 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 5.45110844103 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343291094771 0.236089414692 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129450427968 0.076458572812 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151823129321 0.0737576698707 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.343291094771 0.150856017488 228% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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