Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing.
Despite the fact that eveyone wants to have a enjoyable and full of fun life, most of the people have to alot some of their time to do tasks that they don't enjoy actually. in the following paragraphes I will demonstrate some empirical evidences, which shows our hamunity and our intrinsic goals forces us to do some things we are not really pleased to do.
Working is not always easy and enjoyful, but there is no another way of getting succeed except having big efforts. in order to make beautiful things happen, we should do some repetitive tasks some times that might make us tedious. I beleive that overwhelming and boring processes are part of our lives that we couldn't escape from. thus most of people have to do some unpleasnat and unenjoyable tasks every day and some of them always just complain. for instance, It had been some times that I’ve hade to do somethings which really made me tired and depressed, but I wanted the pay off of the work so I tried to do it in the best way I could.
on the other hand, in order to acheive our dream goals, there is no another way except ignoring life enjoyable moments and showing big efforts to get succeed. it is said that the best way of living is to follow our motivating passions, but these passions mostly tell us to do some thing big and hard. for instance, my father started his career as a poor entrepreneuer and had bad financial situation at the very beginning, but after years of neglecting life’s enjoyable things, he finally succeed and now he can comfortly live rest of his life. the point I wanted to point out by telling that story, is that lives of successful people have two main parts, one part is trying hard and not being involved with enjoyable short term desires, and another part is to rest, have fun and see what a glory life you’ve obtained.
Furthermore, life is not just about having fun and enjoying. although everyone wants to being kept away from difficulties and harsh conditions, but some times our intrinsic philanthropic soul calls us to help our human society which is suffering from a problem. infact, sometimes it is the best way for our society that some people generously sacrifice for people who have suffered from a natural disaster. fo example, kermanshah which is a big city in west of iran experienced a catastrophic earthquake last week, which killed more than four hundreds people. in that situation, many people traveled there to bring some facilities and amenities for people in hope of reducing their pain of getting homeless.
in conclusion, I believe people don’t enjoy their lives always and it doesn’t seem irrational, because people have goals, and they want to get to them. therefore the only path to having successful and positive life is to do the right thing in evey period of time, however it might makes us unpleased.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, really, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2361.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 500.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.722 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72870804502 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59484026483 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 735.3 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.4833733783 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.166666667 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7777777778 20.6045352989 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94444444444 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.5376344086 451% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230639980004 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772892050166 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667636803138 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152665421321 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705863120191 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.