I imagine that enjoy life is a goal for everyone in this world and it is also a tendency in nowadays. However, sometimes we have to do things that we do not enjoy doing aiming further good consequences. These situations commonly appear at work, in the health selfcare scenario or in a family environmental. I will be exploring more about this subject in the following essay.
We have the freedom to decide in what we are going to work for, although for many people the options are not wide and they just have to find a work to survive, independently if they like it or not. Also, even those who decide to work with something they may like, sometimes they have to do somethings that they dislike. For example, I love to be a medical student and I believe I chose the right profession for me. During the years in the medical school, I liked most the clerkship period, that is because we are more in contact with the patients. Even if I love to deal with patients, it is not everything that I like to do, as changing bandages, reporting bad news, watch surgeries, etc. However, I have to do it because it is part of the work and it is the best for the patients.
Often, we are doing not very pleasant things aiming to have a better health. Nowadays, it is increasing the use of diets and physical exercises, that is because people are paying more attention to their health than to they “desires”. It is a fact that is more comfortable to be seated in front of a television or just reading a book at our free time . However, bigger amount of people are changing these habits to practicing sports. Sports and diets, for some people, may not to be more pleasant than resting at home or eating hamburger when you do not have a lot of time, but these certainly will improve the quality of life and health.
Lastly, a classical situation of abdicate the own wishes for a good reason is related to family. I do not have kids yet but I hear many people saying that starting of the day that you put a child on the world, you will have to stop to do many things that you enjoying doing in favor of the children. I believe that building a family is not bad idea, it gives a lot of work but it pays off. For example, parents are all the time changing appointments or leaving the work earlier because they have to pick the kids up from the school. They also deny friend’s invitations because there have plans booked with the kids which they cannot miss. However, these abdications is for the best for their children, which should be worthy.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that people should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. It is part of the process of living and it is often related to a good cause. The life is not made only of good moments or by doing pleasant things, we have to be ready to face it for our own good.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 90, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
...in this world and it is also a tendency in nowadays. However, sometimes we have to do thing...
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Line 5, column 360, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... or just reading a book at our free time . However, bigger amount of people are ch...
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Line 9, column 299, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o be ready to face it for our own good.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, lastly, may, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2323.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 529.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39130434783 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79583152331 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54039980819 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.436672967864 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 731.7 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 9.59856630824 229% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0995657478 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7916666667 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0416666667 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.79166666667 5.45110844103 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281042453031 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889779397719 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120582823243 0.0737576698707 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189344261828 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578251711505 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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