Do you agree or disagree with the following statement ? people in today’s world have become too dependent on automobile
It is undoubtedly true that cars have turned into indispensable commodities for everyone.More importantly, I believe that these days humans rely solely on vehicles for their day to day activities.I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in my body paragraphs.
To begin with, people are so obsessed with cars that they remain insouciant with pollution which has been a major problem to the environment.In fact, they are less concerned with global warming, which is another prominent condition that has resulted in loss of life of thousands of people and also causing instability to the ecosystem.My uncle illustration is an intelligent example of this.For instance, my uncle drives to work everyday.Even though he commute alone, the engine of the vehicle has been so tardy that it brings out exhaust fumes whenever he drives.I spoke to him on changing the car , but he wasn't bordered .He told me how much joy he derives from the vehicle and how it has made his life more meaningful.Besides,his debut shows that his son will make use of the vehicle when he turn eighteen.
Furthermore, people rely solely on cars such that public transportation has been neglected by government officials.Drawing from my own experience, I live in New York, which is on of the biggest cities in the United States.There are just two subway linking the road to the airport.This has really got me infuriated whenever I choose to travel.But majorities seems to be nonchalant since they own a car.If we all could join hands to speak to the mayor of the state hopefully he might try to fix things.
In light of the reasons mentioned, I believe that people rely a lot on cars.This is because they don’t care about the damages it does to the environment, and because the obsession has resulted in neglecting public transport.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, may, really, so, for instance, i feel, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98039215686 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11028016315 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 76.0 20.1344086022 377% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 231.076150868 48.9658058833 472% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 381.0 100.406767564 379% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 76.5 20.6045352989 371% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.5 5.45110844103 449% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.5376344086 524% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0605591507653 0.236089414692 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0314125415151 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0188365888925 0.0737576698707 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0314125415151 0.150856017488 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0188365888925 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.3 11.7677419355 342% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 2.8 58.1214874552 5% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.8 10.1575268817 313% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.79 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.17 8.01818996416 139% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 10.002688172 305% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.4 10.0537634409 322% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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