Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.
With the advancement of technology computers have become versatile. computers are especially popular among children. they used them for study, music, games etc. but the current trend among children is gaming. they waste their valuable time on gaming. this is not good. children should not be allowed to play them.
First reason is, computer games prevent them from studying. computer games are made to be highly addictive. because of that when a kid starts to play games it become their addiction and waste so much time that could have spent on educational purpose. For an example, I remember, when I’m studying for entrance exam to high school in Sri Lanka, I was addicted to games. even in the day before the exam I spent about two, three hours to play games. because of that I could not entered to a better high school. so gaming wasted my time for studying.
Secondly, computer games avoid kids from engaging physical activates and games. computer games forced them to sit down in front of a computer all the day and they can become fat, which could become unhealthy. I remember on my neighbor friend, one who introduce me to computer games. At the primary school was a thin boy. but after he get addicted to computer games within 3 year he became the big ball, weigh over 100 kg. Their family doctor advised him to stop playing computer games and play real games and to exercise. so this provides evidence to why children should avoid from computer games.
Finally, looking at a monitor straight 3-4 hours could harm the eye sight. children’s eyes are very sensitive and they have to use them to have better future. I remember one of my high school friend who was playing games over night wearing very thick spectacles. His eye sight was very weak so that he could not even read anything without spectacles. he even had to do an operation to improve his eye sight, and later he give up on games, but damage has been already done. this say that children should avoid playing computer games to protect their valuable eyes.
As the conclusion, advice need to give is children should avoid from playing computer games. it prevents children from studying and made them inefficient students. it made them fat that could lead to many non-spreading diseases. it also harms eye sight. Therefore it waste valuable childhood and causes many troubles. Hence children should avoid from computer games.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, look, second, secondly, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2002.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 413.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84745762712 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40221284443 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501210653753 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.6003584229 160% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1451340895 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.6666666667 100.406767564 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5151515152 20.6045352989 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.15151515152 5.45110844103 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.5376344086 596% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.85842293907 337% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346723519018 0.236089414692 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981536819579 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100367815429 0.0737576698707 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220435557035 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666592432634 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.96 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 10.002688172 40% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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