Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Providing Internet access is just as important as other services, such as building roads, so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The internet is a great invention of this modern era which provides numerous benefits for people. In my opinion, I think governments should offer free internet access to all of their citizens. In the following essay I intend to put forth my points to support my view.
To begin with, the world is developing at a rapid pace and the internet service plays a crucial in its development. The internet encompasses plethora of information that helps student to seek knowledge. The internet provides convenient way in learning knowledge. Previously, it was difficult for students to study in great international universities. However, internet solves this problem as remote learning through the web. Therefore, the future of students rely on the web services. To be more specific, most of the universities in my city offer online classes , also the student do their assignment and school projects on the computer and this require the internet services.Moreover, the students do not have enough money to afford the internet which is why they often face difficulty in doing their school studies and project. Therefore, if the government allows free access to the internet it would be advantageous for student's education. Thus, this example elucidates that the government should offers free of cost internet to all of its citizen .
In addition, the internet helps to connect swiftly with doctors on call which means it can provides health services to the people in remote areas, when there is no health care nearby. There are many impoverished areas in my country where the urgent health facilities are not available. People travels to big cities so, that they can get better health treatment from the doctors. For instance, my aunty often comes to Karachi to visit her cardiologist because in her city there are no cardio specialists. It is difficult for her as she is heart patient and she can not travel long distances. She can easily communicate to her cardiologist through video chat but because she does not have the internet access so she have to travel very far. Therefore, this instance illustrate that free internet is very important.
In conclusion, I think the government should provides free internet to all of its citizen because it plays crucial role in student education and because it is also beneficial for health care services.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ersities in my city offer online classes , also the student do their assignment an...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
... and this require the internet services.Moreover, the students do not have enough money ...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e of cost internet to all of its citizen . In addition, the internet helps to c...
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Line 5, column 92, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'provide'
Suggestion: provide
...with doctors on call which means it can provides health services to the people in remote...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... available. People travels to big cities so, that they can get better health trea...
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Line 5, column 716, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...oes not have the internet access so she have to travel very far. Therefore, this ins...
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Line 7, column 46, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'provide'
Suggestion: provide
...nclusion, I think the government should provides free internet to all of its citizen bec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1964.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11458333333 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84803528796 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502604166667 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.7481568361 48.9658058833 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274868228423 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860934187207 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792493691621 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171844866791 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580223650385 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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