do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Living as a young person, had been always engaged with some responsibilities and expectations from different parts of society around. Some adults in comparison with their own youth experiences, argues that these expectations become less and easier nowadays. On the contrary, I believe that it is an illusion and young persons have more tough moments now. There are two reasons why I subscribe to this point which are separately elaborated hereunder.
First, I mention that in past, the family's expectations were less. To explain we should consider the difference between success and failure in past and comprise it with nowadays. Because of high differences between living levels today and the huge gap between poor and rich ones, most of families push their children to try harder to fall into successful persons. As a youngster, you are facing with a diverse range of activities that should be accomplished. For example, 200 years ago the ultimate imaginable success in parent's mind for their child was to do a labor job like farming or having livestock just enough to cover his expenses and form his own family. But now, being anyone less than a noble doctor or engineer will not satisfy parents. It is happened because of high interactions between people.
Second, young peoples are present in more diverse social environments that each one has their unique rules. After age of six, our children start to participate in different public places like school, university, military services and, work place. Each of these places has their own restrictions and lots of to-do and not-to-do matters which restricts everyone activities and manners in special patterns. For example, people should wear, talk, behave even eat and drink under some constraints. It is undisputable that living in predetermined lines isn't easy especially for adventurous people in energetic young ages.
In conclusion, I believe that on the contrary of public view, living as a young these days is harder than past because of higher family expectations and stricter social norms all around.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 27, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[8]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'had' and 'been'.
Suggestion: had always been
Living as a young person, had been always engaged with some responsibilities and ...
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Line 2, column 23, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...rated hereunder. First, I mention that in past, the familys expectations were less. To...
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Line 2, column 280, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the families') or simply say ''most families''.
Suggestion: most of the families; most families
...he huge gap between poor and rich ones, most of families push their children to try harder to fa...
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Line 3, column 299, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun to-do seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of (to-do)'.
Suggestion: lots of (to-do)
...e places has their own restrictions and lots of to-do and not-to-do matters which restricts e...
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Line 3, column 547, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...able that living in predetermined lines isnt easy especially for adventurous people ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19760479042 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76089466522 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625748502994 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9041414642 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.117647059 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6470588235 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58823529412 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120105181977 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375098495476 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0272629636886 0.0737576698707 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0716593534558 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260622945083 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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