Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Social norms and rules serve as guidance on people's career development and social interactions. In spite of this important role, there are complaints that the rules one is expected to follow in adolescence and early adulthood are too strict. In my opinion, however, the rules are not too harsh if we take morality and responsibility into consideration.
To start with, some seemingly strict rules are reasonable from a moral perspective, in the sense that they define how a young person should be considerate and take care of others. Many rules in daily life can be understood from this point of view, from not making noise at late night to standing on the right side of the elevator to offering seats to elderly people, all of which need the young people to pay close attention to the time and people around them. While these long-built rules may seem inconvenient even annoying, they are essential for the harmony of the community.
Furthermore, rigid and boring may some rules seem to be, following them is an effective way to take responsibility for one’s own career and life. For example, young people are expected by their parents to have plans and make certain accomplishments at certain life stages, such as obtaining a university degree in early 20s followed by a job place with stable salaries in late 20s, but a “less boring” lifestyle with more flexibility, freedom and possibilities can be more attractive to many. Although it is evident that each individual has their own preferences in lifestyle, the former way of life is more helpful than the latter in developing skills and transition to independence, which is crucial in early adulthood.
In conclusion, the rules are not too strict due to reasons in morality and responsibility.
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Suggestion:
...which need the young people to pay close attention to the time and people around ...
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...e with stable salaries in late 20s, but a 'less boring' lifestyle with ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in spite of, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 293.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0819112628 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98286876786 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59385665529 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.3340266638 48.9658058833 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.9 100.406767564 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3 20.6045352989 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 5.45110844103 229% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20265847797 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867115332106 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565270140034 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139513293727 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341469844244 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 11.7677419355 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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