Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.
In the modern era, the technology is developing at a galloping rate. Increasing the level of knowledge brings with it expectations that young follow some rules. Although some people believes that these rule are strict, I subscribe to the fact that these rules are essential and quite easy to follow. In what follows, two elaborate reasons will vindicate my standpoint.
First of all, there is a lot of means of interaction and different ways for entertainments. These factors can have a considerable impact on different aspects of young people's lives. So, it is critical to have some rules for the youth to follow. For instance, when I was at high school, I enjoyed spending time with my friends and sometimes I got home late. On day My parent talked to me and said I did not have the right to get home after a certain hour. At first, I became upset but after a couple of years, I understood the rule was really helpful because I had a great deal of time for study my lessons. It results in a higher grade in my lessons. Moreover, being late night out might have dangerous problems for me such as the threat robbery.
The second noteworthy reason is that as a fundamental concept in psychological contexts, establishing reasonable rules for young people plays a prominent rule in future life of the youth. I believe that these rule are helpful for the young in different way because not only can it has short-term effect on their lives, but it also has a durable effect on their future. Young person will become an organized person that learn follow the rules and based on that do its career. They will learn how under specific rules flourish their idea and complete their task. So, rules have a long-lasting effect on occupational life as well.
In conclusion, I believe that rules are necessary for the youth and help them in different aspects of their lives. This is because the modern day have many means which attract young people. They should follow some rules enjoy those means and do their task at the same time. Also, following rules help the young to growth their personality and become prepared for their future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 24, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun means seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of means'.
Suggestion: a lot of means
...my standpoint. First of all, there is a lot of means of interaction and different ways for e...
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Line 5, column 426, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to follow'
Suggestion: to follow
...l become an organized person that learn follow the rules and based on that do its care...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, really, second, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1760.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71849865952 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56513030471 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514745308311 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3606275812 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8095238095 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7619047619 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211587052188 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687779323005 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070775125154 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152493945664 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550789670794 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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