Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Today many countries use strict rules and regulations for the youth. The question is whether they should be so strict or not. In my estimations, the rules are needed for the society to grow; however, sometimes they can have adverse effects on young people. So, I see this issue from two perspectives.
On one hand, in this amazingly changing world we need novel rules; inasmuch as, the old ones are truly behind the days. Today's rules make the youth think in box, instead of out of box. Creativity is number one skill to have for the upcoming world. For the outdated rules I want to bring an example that would bring a further explanation. My grandparents and parents used to wear dresses and skirts that is why they could hardly accept that I am wearing jeans and trouser. That is simple example; though, very noticeable and I want to bring another example of a rule, which is more serious and concerns the society. That rule or rather low is attending high school. In my country, students are forced to go to school twelve years and frankly talking, we do not gain the education relevant to that number of years. We do not gain the skills that are crucial for the future career. For instance, what if I want to become a dancer or a singer or a painter? Why do I have to spend so much time doing nothing for me? I think ten or even nine years are enough to have the basic and fundamental education. Maybe I complicated my speech by complaining, but that is just the inside voice that shouts.
On the other hand, some strict rules are for maintaining the piece and calmness of the country. These are for all, but mostly for youngsters. Young people can easily be attracted by drugs or by hostile people that is why governments formulate and create rules for them. For example, in my country, smoking in social environments is forbidden. I think it is a huge step and a great low, because children or those, who hate smoke, would definitely benefit from this. This low is not only for the youth but also for the whole society. Additionally, the community would be healthier and happier.
To put it in a nutshell, the rules are indispensable, but sometimes out of date. So, we should make sure that we update the rules and regulations, so that there would be no misunderstanding between new and old generations. I firmly believe, everything would be fine in the near future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, frankly, however, if, may, so, for example, for instance, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 426.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59154929577 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61755931026 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539906103286 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6046274077 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.4444444444 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7777777778 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.51851851852 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112619677273 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0322794635534 0.076458572812 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385300299724 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0742320534533 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355624558642 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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