Do you agree or disagree with the following statement “Should a city preserve or destroy its historic building?” use specific reasons and examples to support your answer?
I have never seen my city but I will preserve historic buildings in my city. On the one hand, I’ve known that the development and improvement of buildings in cities play an important role in facilities and conveniences for people, in fact, changing the shape of cities n order to modernize cause to like people their cities, on the other hand, I’ve agreed with this subject that we should preserve our old buildings and don’t destroy them cause to attract people who will visit cities as a tourist in cities.
First, For the first time, one of the questions that come into my people who visit cities is what kind of historical architecture and art were used by people who had lived in this city. I have an idea that preserving the oldest buildings in cities cause to keep a history of city and country because we are not able to build structure and buildings such an ancient people, in order to keep history and culture we have to avoid damage and destruction of buildings. In fact, they are the inheritance and investment of ancestors who had preserved them from invasion and wars for a long time.
Second, one of the most important things that play role in tourist attraction is that the appearance of cities where buildings, statues, streets, have revealed the history and art and culture of cities to tourists who like to meet traditional and historical art and architecture in cities. The architecture of the city plays a key important role in the tourist attraction where they want to look for historic and traditional buildings. In this case, we have been shocked people who come to cities where they look at the architecture of buildings for figuring out history and culture.
Third, as a matter of fact, societies and communities tend to have historical documents for proving authentic and reliable. Although, we are not able to forget that they have to change their construction for making convenient and comfortable for their lives. In order to improve and change they need to build modern buildings that have a lot of new technology for helping people especially old people. For instance, changing the buildings, houses, and construction in my city has not happened and It has been a long time since I was in that city.
In conclusion, some of the reasons such as history, tourists, and also the improvement of technology and science cause to destroy the old and unusable buildings in the city. As a result, in my opinion, one of the important things that lead to attracting tourists is to build new buildings however old buildings make a great view of cities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 283, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'modernizing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'order' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: modernizing
...t, changing the shape of cities n order to modernize cause to like people their cities, on t...
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Line 1, column 461, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'attracting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: attracting
...dings and don't destroy them cause to attract people who will visit cities as a touri...
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Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'keeping'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: keeping
...ng the oldest buildings in cities cause to keep a history of city and country because w...
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Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ce I was in that city. In conclusion, some of the reasons such as history, tourists, and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, look, second, so, then, third, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2153.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 446.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82735426009 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72960123795 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.412556053812 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 666.9 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.2365170358 48.9658058833 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.785714286 100.406767564 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8571428571 20.6045352989 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8571428571 5.45110844103 236% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178592627823 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675750626087 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552157471506 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114619009766 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752259488515 0.0645574589148 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 11.7677419355 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.247311828 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.