Do you agree or disagree with the following statement “Should a city preserve or destroy its historic building?” use specific reasons and examples to support your answer?
I’ve known that the development and improvement of buildings in cities play an important role in preparing facilities and conveniences for people but I’ve agreed with this subject that we should keep our old and historic buildings for instance in the case of religion, we must keep old churches, temples, and mosques. We must avoid to destroy them for three reasons preserving the history of the city, attracting tourists, keeping the historical documents of city. Although, changing the shape of the city in order to modernize causes to enjoy people who live in the city and also governments are able to inspire people with historic buildings in the cities.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is better to be a follower than a leader use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 69
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement “grades encourage students to learn” use specific reasons and examples to support your answer? 63
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement “Should a city preserve or destroy its historic building?” use specific reasons and examples to support your answer? 40
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement “In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today” use specific reasons and examples to support your answer? 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement People should focus on the happiness of others instead of their own happiness use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 85
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 337, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid destroying'.
Suggestion: avoid destroying
...churches, temples, and mosques. We must avoid to destroy them for three reasons preserving the h...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 546, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'enjoying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: enjoying
...f the city in order to modernize causes to enjoy people who live in the city and also go...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 15.1003584229 7% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 43.0788530466 21% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 52.1666666667 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 560.0 1977.66487455 28% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 109.0 407.700716846 27% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1376146789 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.231146315 4.48103885553 72% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76434669658 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 69.0 212.727598566 32% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633027522936 0.524837075471 121% => OK
syllable_count: 170.1 618.680645161 27% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 20.6003584229 15% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.1344086022 179% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.6855049319 48.9658058833 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 186.666666667 100.406767564 186% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.3333333333 20.6045352989 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.45110844103 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225756281524 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134751113429 0.076458572812 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381669378679 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225756281524 0.150856017488 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.9 11.7677419355 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 58.1214874552 60% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.1575268817 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.01818996416 127% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 86.8835125448 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.0537634409 163% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.247311828 205% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.