Do you agree or disagree with the following statement “It is better to be a follower than a leader” use specific reasons and examples to support your answer?
I suppose this idea that follower is better than a leader for several reasons which include having responsible for followers, managing members of the groups, having to plan for future, making match and harmony between members of groups and so on
First of all, in my opinion, the most important character that leads to the following leaders is that leaders should improve and develop their skills in terms of organization, management, and unification which needs to raise their talents. Leaders have to raise their science of management even though they are in a certain way. For instance, since I studied in high school my teacher gave me responsible for a leader in class I have found the best way for management and organization in class.
leaders always need to have new skills and knowledge because they have to find problems out and then they can figure the solutions out, another reason is that followers have a lower chance for a mistake and wrong way but leaders always blame why they can’t find the best way, leaders need to organize and to manage groups who have different kinds of characters in different circumstances, therefore, they must think very quickly and wisely, other reasons include responsible that leaders keep the follower under the control. Leaders usually have accepted responsibility for what happened.
For example, one of the most importantly responsible for leaders considers making decisions when all the members of the group meet problems, dangers, difficulties. Leaders should have been able to manage and problems in groups to find solutions. In this case, I have taken a strong dislike to one of the leaders who are not perceived as one of the best solutions for their followers these leaders usually are in poor taste. I always have liked to follow leaders who have exemplary manners which are difficult for me leading and not following. It’s not fair to expect leaders or parents to do everything in the family. I believe that various factors have an impact on a leader’s management. Moreover, for instance, two years ago when I wanted to visit my leader in company for the first time then it was beginning to dawn on me.
Leaders usually have challenged with both of the followers and plans and then they must decide under the circumstances of followers. In this case, I think that it is so difficult a decision imaginable for them.
And then there’s the question of who is going was going to response this mistake.
Second, leaders have attempted to show themselves that they don’t need to increase their experiences and understandings, I mean they don’t want to share everything who believe to have a relationship with followers. I think that gradually they have to change their behaviors because they will not be able to come back to followers. Leaders must have a Knowledge for finding a solution. For instance, I was working in a factory about four years ago, at that time there was trying to resolve the dispute between managers and workers at the factory, as a result, my boss could find one specific solution for settling dispute down. For example, sometimes followers are children who are reluctant to accept parents and make things difficult but parents give up work to spend more time them and that will help to find a solution.
Third, I believe that leaders play important roles in assign a label of groups, in my opinion, leaders have so difficult duty and they need to be able to match all the members in a group. Leaders usually have presented their plans in meeting and showing how can match and organize the members of a group for one specific purpose. Sometimes, leaders have not controlled in certain circumstances. For example, my boss in the office who was a leader of coworkers said if I am all feeling good and relaxed after the break, let’s get on with the meeting. None of the followers, applying was accepted by leaders because they didn’t pay attention to criticism, as a result, I was surprised how my boss could match his coworkers when they didn’t want to match with my boss.
In conclusion, some of the most important things jump to the conclusion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Leaders
...management and organization in class. leaders always need to have new skills and know...
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Line 13, column 360, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'Knowledge'.
Suggestion: Knowledge
...me back to followers. Leaders must have a Knowledge for finding a solution. For instance, I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, third, for example, for instance, i mean, i suppose, i think, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 25.0 11.0286738351 227% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 94.0 52.1666666667 180% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3483.0 1977.66487455 176% => OK
No of words: 705.0 407.700716846 173% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94042553191 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.15284737739 4.48103885553 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73476354431 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 299.0 212.727598566 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.424113475177 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1068.3 618.680645161 173% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.507641666 48.9658058833 234% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 133.961538462 100.406767564 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1153846154 20.6045352989 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.53405017921 198% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172594963967 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620465621404 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440648026245 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0899048956619 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403111560003 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 11.7677419355 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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