Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Sometimes it is better not to tell the truth. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
It is clear that relationships are helping people in most aspects of life and individuals enjoy having good relationships in today's world. By the other hand, maintaining this healthy relationship is a hard work if some points do not be considered as well. If I were acquired to choose one option, I would altogether prefer that it is better to not tell the truth to others. I feel this way by three reasons that will be explored in subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, telling some small lies can motivate people who are important for us. Individuals are naturally competitive and feel they are the best at whatever assignment they are appointed. Albeit it is an athletic event or a video game, they feel confident if we encourage them. My own experience is an example like this. Last month, one of my friends wanted to be an English teacher at one of private universities. He asked me that what I think about his skills. I knew that where he was going to introduce himself as a teacher, is an academic place and he was not eligible to be an instructor their, but I told him that he has good English skills and he would be accepted if they interview him. As a result, he interviewed and fortunately was accepted at university. It shows that sometimes lying can give motivation for those who have a close relationship with us. Had I told him the truth that he was not eligible to teach English , he would have lost his self confidence altogether.
Secondly, being honest all of the time can create anxiety to us. Saying unpleasant truths may cause people get heartbroken. For instance, last day, my cousin asked me about his new coat he had newly bought. As it was so expensive and not enjoyable, I told him that you have been tricked by the seller. He did not act as well, but I felt he has gotten heartbroken according what I said to him. As a result, I felt uncomfortable whole the day because of saying the truth. I was afraid that it may jeopardize our friendship. Had I said that his coat is so nice and fit to him, I could have actually prohibit the bad feels I had after telling the truth.
Thirdly, some truths are as much as private that shouldn't be said to others. Saying some personal truths can be used negatively by some people who are jealous to us. If they knew our personal secrets, they might share them with others. As my own experience, once I wanted to participate in an examination that had been held by our college. Since I had an accomplished rival during the university, I was always studying hard to get the first position of the class, but he was so adept and never let me to do what I want. I told one of my classmates about this exam. As I count on him, I firmly account the tips and tricks of test for him. Unfortunately, he carried all what I had said to him to my competitor. Finally, he enrolled himself in the examination and once again he got my dreams to be the first one in the test. Had not I told my classmate the truths, I could have gain the first position of the class.
In conclusion, I believe that there are times that the truths should not be told to others. Because in one way telling some small lies motivate the people, and by the other hand, it can adversely effect on our feelings and causes to feel bad turmoil.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 36.0 15.1003584229 238% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 113.0 43.0788530466 262% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2686.0 1977.66487455 136% => OK
No of words: 604.0 407.700716846 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44701986755 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.95746018188 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64104302457 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 272.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.450331125828 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 839.7 618.680645161 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 25.0 9.59856630824 260% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.6003584229 165% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.521474261 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7647058824 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58823529412 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0778024864067 0.236089414692 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0226871042315 0.076458572812 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285302910213 0.0737576698707 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0528750049121 0.150856017488 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169471868319 0.0645574589148 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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