Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Sometimes it is better not to tell the truth. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Nowadays we live in the world where people have freedom in all kinds of manners. It is known from years that telling the true or the lie is very easy and we all have a choice to do so depends of the situation.
Personally, I believe that telling the true is very important in our daily relationship. The honesty is the key for happiness and make our life more secure. On the other hand telling lies can save a lot of misunderstandings and make us feel more comfortable. I fell this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, being in happy relation or friendship it does not mean to be honest with someone in every part of live. The same rules can be found in our place of work or studying. My own experience is a compelling example of this. Last summer I met my old friend. I have not seen him from ages. He was quite surprised to see me at the International Duch Company in one of the It department. That time I was deployed to administrate IT systems and for me it was a very important contract. When he asked how I got that lucrative job in a such a well-known place I sad to him that I have passed a recruitment process. I knew that small lie it does not make a harm. In addition I told him to apply for position in our department and that is not so hard to be invited for interview. After that I could notice the smile on his face because he has just came to leave his application.This lie made him relaxed and more confident. I told him this story on purpose.
Secondly, If you want to have a trustful friend or to be treated as a good one, you must be ready for lies which sometimes makes people more relaxed and joyful. To me, good and healthy relationship is based on understanding even if we know that someone lies because does not hurt you but only wants to comfort you. For instance that was after last haircut of my best friend, for him was great, for me he looked like an actor from Star Trek movie. I lied of course and I have told him that this new hair style really suits him.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that small lies makes our life more interesting and predictable, sometimes is better to do so and be out of the problems caused by minor friendly misunderstanding.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 378, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'It'?
Suggestion: the; It
...he International Duch Company in one of the It department. That time I was deployed to...
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Line 3, column 494, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...or me it was a very important contract. When he asked how I got that lucrative job i...
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Line 3, column 671, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...t small lie it does not make a harm. In addition I told him to apply for position in our...
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Line 3, column 888, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
... has just came to leave his application.This lie made him relaxed and more confident...
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Line 4, column 172, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: ,  
...es people more relaxed and joyful. To me, good and healthy relationship is based...
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Line 4, column 251, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s based on understanding even if we know that someone lies because does not hurt ...
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Line 4, column 466, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ke an actor from Star Trek movie. I lied of course and I have told him that this ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, of course, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 73.0 43.0788530466 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1871.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 426.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39201877934 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86927159364 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535211267606 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8112496801 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0952380952 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7619047619 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0634750380315 0.236089414692 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0182558336312 0.076458572812 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0248956353721 0.0737576698707 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0464324924144 0.150856017488 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217859153123 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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