Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Personally, I agree with the statement that posits successful people try new things and take risks, and I believe it is true because of two reasons which I elaborate in the following paragraphs.
First, learning new things and exploit them are the source of success in contemporary life. When people are greed to learn new information and methods, they have vast opportunities to make innovative and creative stuff. I can remember the biography of Steve Jobs who was a founder of the Apple company. Apple company is a big and successful company that includes many small companies in various aspects. young Steve Jobs with his friend had stablished the Apple in his home garage and had a creative and new idea about manufacturing and programming computers in new and unusual ways. For a while, They wasn't successful to attract investors to improve their products but after years their first product as a MAC computer released and it became popular between people. Ultimately, they become a new brand in the software market and took a more risky decision for their unique products which made their outcome valuable and prevalent. These circumstances by using the new things to do make the Apple company to become one of the biggest and lucrative stocks in Wall street market. This biography was very inspirational for me to become successful by trying to learn and manipulate new things.
On the other way, pioneers in every successful business try to take risk. Most of the time they evaluate the reward to risk ratio and make effort to make risky but profitable decision in every day of life. For instance, Warren Buffet, as one of the famous billionaires in stock trading, is a thoughtful and voracious man to learn about new and small businesses. He always collects information about these businesses and would pay to buy these businesses when they are not profitable, but they would be in the future. He is well known as an expert gardener for tiny and small plants (new and small businesses in stock markets). Personally, I believe that these decisions to take risk not only making people successful, but also making them pioneers in every aspect of their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Young
...any small companies in various aspects. young Steve Jobs with his friend had stablish...
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Line 2, column 602, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...new and unusual ways. For a while, They wasnt successful to attract investors to impr...
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Line 4, column 185, Rule ID: ANINFOR_EVERY_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in everyday'?
Suggestion: in everyday
...t to make risky but profitable decision in every day of life. For instance, Warren Buffet, a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, while, for instance, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 367.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91825613079 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68796912234 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520435967302 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0778238673 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.8125 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9375 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9375 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212450977192 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691706451656 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598676500685 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165894969028 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616324198746 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.