Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? ‎ Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the ‎classroom.‎

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the ‎classroom.‎

In the modern era, Social and political views is essential for every nation. When the citizens of a ‎country have been good educated and learned social and political sciences, they could have a great ‎influence on the all aspect of country. Although, many of people and researcher believe that, teachers ‎should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom, In my opinion, ‎Teachers must share their social or political views with their student and discuss about them. In follow, ‎I will elaborate two reasons for my claim. ‎

The first exquisite reason to be mentioned is social and political science is essential for students. Many ‎of educations should started from law ages like Social and political sciences. If social and political ‎discussion had learned in school period, it could be mindset of the people when she become adult. ‎They can accept many social and political challenge easier than people don’t have these skills. For ‎parable, when I was a student at the elementary school, we had a time for discussing and thinking ‎about social and political issues each week. This time was very suit for us, because our teacher ‎denoted a prize for the best idea about social and political solution. Therefore, we learned many social ‎sciences, and political decision in country. ‎

Second reason that convince me is, political and social discussion help the student to improve ‎cooperation skills in society. When A teacher debate her social and political views, he encourage his ‎student to think and incorporate about socials challenge, this method prepare students to be sensitive ‎about social and political events. The newest research about at the Social and Health Life Center in the ‎northern California university depicted, more than 75 percent of students that educated from school ‎with social and political treatment have a high corporate in the last election in the U.S. Hence, pay ‎attention to the social or political views, at school could have a indeniable effect on the students.‎

In short, with aforementioned it concluded that, while some people said it is not suitable that teachers ‎tell about their social or political views at classroom, in my viewpoint, not only discussing about social ‎or political issues is suitable, but also it is essential and must be a part of the classes education for basic ‎and regularly effect such as social cooprations and rudimentary education that the society need. ‎

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: encourages
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Suggestion: an
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Suggestion:
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... is essential and must be a part of the classes education for basic ‎and regularly effe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, so, therefore, while, in short, such as, in my opinion, in my view

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 13.8261648746 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2127.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 401.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3042394015 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77134672755 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516209476309 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 185.207398913 48.9658058833 378% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 151.928571429 100.406767564 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6428571429 20.6045352989 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333417039804 0.236089414692 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131918713723 0.076458572812 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109356825431 0.0737576698707 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245374916052 0.150856017488 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.09353478882 0.0645574589148 145% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 11.7677419355 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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