Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
Throughout history, in all civilized societies, the speed of finishing work engendered copious controversies among people. Some people incline toward opinion that it is vital for people to work quickly and risk making fatal. Some others, however, may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that workers have to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct. As far as I am concerned, it is extremely beneficial for people to perform their job without any mistakes. In the following paragraphs, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
The first exquisite point is that it is plausible that working rapidly waste your time. When a person work fast and finishing his jobs, after that if it contains errors, he has to do it again and all of the time he spent on it are going to be wasted. Moreover, a person who works in a big company going to be rewarded if he performs a job without mistake by his boss. For example, my father worked in a famous company and he always finishes his work without any fatal and after 2 years her boss gives him prize and make him manager of important part of business.
The second important reason supporting my idea is that it helps company to save his costumer and attract new people to his product. Nowadays, the development in the technology happen at very fast pace and causes the competition between many company. Hence, when a specific company build a material that have high quality are going to encourage other people to be attracted and buy its material and also it can save its own costumer. Also, the company are going to sell most of its products and profits more that other company. additionally, when an employee make a mistake, it is possible that his manager fired him and he loses his job.
To make a long story short, based on the aforementioned arguments, executing a work slowly is more vital since it helps you save your time and have more advantageous for company.Consequently, it is highly recommended that people consider quality because it helps them to find better opportunity .In fact, there are myriad of other reasons, challenging the above statement, which could be mentioned but are not embraced due to the dearth of time.
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- TPO 32 80
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- Integrated tpo8 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 196, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...tains errors, he has to do it again and all of the time he spent on it are going to be was...
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Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun company seems to be countable; consider using: 'many companies'.
Suggestion: many companies
...pace and causes the competition between many company. Hence, when a specific company build a...
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Line 3, column 527, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Additionally
...ts and profits more that other company. additionally, when an employee make a mistake, it is...
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Line 4, column 178, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Consequently
... and have more advantageous for company.Consequently, it is highly recommended that people c...
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Line 4, column 294, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...it helps them to find better opportunity .In fact, there are myriad of other reaso...
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Line 4, column 296, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
... helps them to find better opportunity .In fact, there are myriad of other reasons...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, as to, for example, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1820.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78947368421 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74079168456 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552631578947 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.5004560039 48.9658058833 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.333333333 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226782197578 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720961270824 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659620604839 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135831031717 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066903668596 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.