Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Time is money; thus everyone tries to use the best of their time. In today's world most of the people are in hurry to do their tasks on time and usually they do not have enough free time; to put it another way, people suffer from stresses that are caused by changes of life style. In my opinion, it is not necessary to work quickly and risk making mistakes. The reasons for this idea are elaborated in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, working quickly and making mistakes are not always proper for human's health. Making mistakes sometimes are good for us to be experienced and well-known but working quickly increase the rate and amount of making mistakes; therefore the huge amount of mistakes adversely decrease our mood, incentive and enthusiasm. Working quickly leads us to be anxious and stressed out; moreover, it depletes people's concentration; as a result people cannot do their tasks well and final conclusion of their effort would not be as same as they have expected to be. Take the example of preparing for a test, when we study quickly without any pause on some important points and delving a little deeper in the subject, we cannot be able to get the high score but study slowly enable us to focus more and figure out the main important points.
Secondly, in my point of view jobs that need quick decisions and performance are not suitable for everyone. Some people are able to work fast and make decisions in a short time, while others are not capable to handle many tasks in a short and expeditious way. Thus, people should not expect too much from themselves and evaluate what kind of jobs fit them and they can be prosperous in it.
To sum up, I effectively believe that working quickly and risk of making mistakes is not suitable for every one because people have diverse personalities and abilities; Thus some people have ability to work quickly without too much mistakes while others are not able; moreover, working quickly lead people to not have enough concentration on their jobs and become anxious.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ave ability to work quickly without too much mistakes while others are not able; mor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, kind of, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76704545455 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46624290786 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528409090909 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.6077439223 48.9658058833 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.833333333 100.406767564 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 20.6045352989 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0833333333 5.45110844103 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245900347346 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987766464855 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732826617774 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148923573252 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057043579732 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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