Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today's world, almost everyone has a job because he needs it for him to survive in this society. And different people have different working styles. Some promote work quickly and risk making mistakes, others support working slowly and perfect. This statement gives us an idea that the former is better. I partly agree with this opinion, however, this some situation that requires for further consideration.
On the one hand, people should know that efficient is the most important thing that should be paid attention in work. Efficiency means do it quickly and almost correctly. Nothing in this world is absolutely perfect. Everything has its flaws even the diamond, a jewelry which seems transparent, but it cannot be a hundred percentage pure because during it formation, there must be some other chemicals participate in it. So if the product can be applied without any problem in a long term, even if it has some small mistakes in it, we should overlook them and concern about how to amplify its producing efficiency. And the pace of this world is so fast that once you slow down you would be left behind. As a famous phone factory Nokia, its products always have well fame because of its toughness but it refutes to advance its system which used to be so perfect for its phone. This stubborn leads to the decline in its sales and promotes the increasing of other phone companies which are willing to use the new system although it may not be perfect in that time. Now, the factory is facing to bankrupt. It teaches us whatever we do, what we must put in the first place is efficiency.
On the other hand, however, there are some areas that must make sure that what have been produced is almost safe or correct no matter how much time it takes. For example, in our medical markets, we must be sure the safety of the medicine. In the past, there were many cases of fake medicine which would on the contrary, did damage to people use them. Also, other areas like manufacturing a plane, its safety should be ensured not its producing time. It regards to the lives of the people who ride them. So in these fields taking care of the amount is an irresponsible behavior, the perfection is the ultimate goal.
In conclusion, I admit work quickly and risk making mistakes is somehow better than working slowly and make sure everything is correct. However, we should also be alarmed that in many fields what the products need are the safety and correctness.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In today s world it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 90
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In today s world it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In today s world it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement For a success in a future job the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school 81
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 433, Rule ID: IT_IS[7]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...plane, its safety should be ensured not its producing time. It regards to the lives...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, so, well, for example, in conclusion, on the contrary, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2034.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 432.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70833333333 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45356393732 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527777777778 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 644.4 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.859158526 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4347826087 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7826086957 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82608695652 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202051231557 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628342019027 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104306618204 0.0737576698707 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163752650141 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106005660199 0.0645574589148 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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