Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
All round development of students is important. Often, colleges and universities tend to give more importance studies over social skills and sports. In my opinion, sports and other social activities in colleges and universities should receive equal imoortance and financial support as do classes and libraries. This is because stuidnts should get complete chance to discover their opportunities and passion.
Everyone is different. This diversity is what makes makes the world so beautiful. What this also means is that people have different interets, while some may be more interested to puruse more traditional career paths like science or literature, the others may want to pursue arts or sports. We often see that universities and colleges tend to focus either on academics or other diverse career paths. What this does, is it forces the students to follow the same paths. And hence such institutions allocate funds for the development of academic streams. Such a pattern does not let students explore their interests and leads to the creation more unhappy indivivuals.
Another important reason why think that all activities -- academic and social-- should receive equal support, is becuase people need academic skills along with social skills. If a student is only made to study, take tests, and make progress in one doamin, he will struggle with other spheres of life. Man is a social animal, and needs to learn social activities to live a better life. We humans live in a society, with people, our whole lives. Hence social skills are just as important, if not more important.
In conlcusion, I strongly believe that social activities and sports should also get equal support in colleges and universities. This is becuase everyone needs to experinece different doamins to discover their interests. If people succeed in doing so, they would be able to contribute to society better by creating great work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: makes
...ne is different. This diversity is what makes makes the world so beautiful. What this also ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er diverse career paths. What this does, is it forces the students to follow the ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... society, with people, our whole lives. Hence social skills are just as important, if...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 307.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25407166124 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70096112713 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57654723127 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.5968708143 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8947368421 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1578947368 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.68421052632 5.45110844103 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283752312992 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798768938413 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117151071553 0.0737576698707 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187630217871 0.150856017488 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111162132301 0.0645574589148 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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