Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Adult age is the best time of anyone life because the rest of the life is determined by that time decision. The future is full of uncertainty and taking a discreet choice for a better and feasible future has a paramount importance. Young has no roles to determine the offing society is the given context-with this someone would agree, others would disagree. In my view, the importance of young generation decision for the future is the most pressing because of the following two important reason.
The main reason is that the earth future is depends on present young generation. The climate change is a critical phenomena in our time, every country is suffering for this earth disaster from Brazil Amazons fire to Americas different prairie fire. The sea surface is also rising that is the clear omen for the upheaval future. These things are not for the young but it results from the orthodox and unscientific world leaders decision. Apart from that, some young show the light on the other side of the tunnel. For example, Greeta Thunberg is an environmental activist who is fighting now to save our rights for the livable future where the atrocity of climate change will not wither our forests and coastal lands. She already formulated and demanded many roles for the world leader and already she got optimistic clearance. As you can see that, the change is going to happen by the hand of the young generation where the octogenarian made a barrier for the peaceful future.
Another reason is that future social change and justice is clearly understandable by the adult hand. In our world, we always see different injustices, biases and prejudices. On the face, it torn down our society and shattered our dream by inculcating the old age prejudices. Nowadays young are come to the focus as they are protesting and protecting for social reformation. To be more specific, a few years ago in 2015 in Bangladesh a movement was happened against quota system. In this quota system only freedom fighters sons-daughters were allowed to get the large chunks of advantages but the others students were not allowed although those students have considerable talents. After that protest, Bangladesh government understood the problem and passes a law to ensure equal advantages for all. This experience taught me that, the youngs cumulative efforts has brought a huge change, then who the earth is going to deny their influences in our society?
In sum, it is possible to delineate the bad side of the young generation and their vulnerabilities but in long run those arguments will not convincing. As young are not only display a peaceful future where environment is temperate but also a future where society is not filled with injustice or biases. So, we should keep faith on our young.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 115, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'phenomenon'?
Suggestion: phenomenon
...ation. The climate change is a critical phenomena in our time, every country is suffering...
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Line 4, column 250, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ire to Americas different prairie fire. The sea surface is also rising that is the ...
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Line 8, column 141, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'convince'
Suggestion: convince
...ut in long run those arguments will not convincing. As young are not only display a peacef...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, apart from, for example, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2320.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 468.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95726495726 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6990148445 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534188034188 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 738.0 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7392255731 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.869565217 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.347826087 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.60869565217 5.45110844103 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162193639949 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472249373098 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523826660596 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112301255208 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585928571862 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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