Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In recent times, there has been a widespread debate on whether teenagers today have any impact on any important decisions of their future society or not. While some people believe that young people today have a significant role in their communities, I hold the opposite view. I think, nowadays, young people have no impact on any decisions for their societies.
To begin with, teenagers today tend to entertain themselves more than contributing in any events for the community. They have eager to play video games most of their times. For example, my nephew Mohammed is fifteen years old; his mother forced to punish him sometimes in order to leave video games and eat with her in the same table. He used to play more than twelve hours a day. Therefore, he would not take any decisions for his community while he is setting in front of his games. On the other hand, young people in the past did not have all these games, so they were able to spend most of their time in community services.
In addition to playing games more often, young people today have very weak personality. They lack many communicational skills and the ability to negotiate with people. For instance, Steve jobs admired electronic devices when he was fifteen years old. He had the ability to fix many of them at his small room in his house, but he was not able to talk with his parents about his talent because he did not know how to talk with people and convince them toward anything. After he became an adult, he took many classes to improve his communication skills, so he was able at adult age to make great decision for the community. Unlike young people in the past, their parents tend to let them stay with people who are older than them in order to let them learn many skills. A good example about that is my father, he knew how to talk with people and convince them since he was twelve years old because he spent many times talking with older people.
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- It has been said, "Not everything that is learned is contained in books." Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why? 60
- Some young children spend a great amount of their time practicing sports. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 66
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 348.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5632183908 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30707580242 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520114942529 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0026040913 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.25 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164271743502 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671000969679 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513400497178 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134411347335 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640142366786 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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