Do you agree or disagree with the following statements？ Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In recent times, there has been a widespread debate on whether people do few things well when they are busy doing many different tasks or not. While some people believe that doing several things at the same time allow people to accomplish that work well, I hold the opposite view. I think that when people put their effort to do one thing at the same time, they do it perfectly.
To begin with, doing on one thing at a specific time prevents people to become distracted. It becomes easy for the brain to focus properly on one single task. For example, imagine someone has many different tasks in one day. His/ her brain will be distracted to think about all these tasks. Therefor, the task will not be done in a perfect way because there are many elements that annoy the brain and prevent it from doing the work effectively.
Another good point is when people do several things at one time, the level of stress hormones in our body will raise. This situation prevents people to think or solve problems in creative ways. For instance, when the dopamine level decreases in our body because the high pressure of doing many tasks, this hormone sends signals to the brain and prevent it from thinking. Furthermore, diminish the dopamine level will increase the depression, so people will stop working or finishing their tasks.
Last but not least, when people feel that they have many thins to do, they tend to escape from that by doing nothing. For example, when I was at university, I had four projects that I need to submit within one week. As a result, I did not submit anything because I knew that I had multiple things to do. Instead of that I left everything and I went out with my friends.
In conclusion, doing a lot of tasks at one time hold people from doing that tasks in perfect way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 115, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ew things well when they are busy doing many different tasks or not. While some people believe...
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Line 2, column 193, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... task. For example, imagine someone has many different tasks in one day. His/ her brain will b...
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Line 2, column 328, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a perfect way" with adverb for "perfect"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ks. Therefor, the task will not be done in a perfect way because there are many elements that an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 324.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54320987654 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2831162974 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512345679012 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7741564151 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5882352941 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0588235294 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82352941176 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323927361434 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121299694413 0.076458572812 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100247833582 0.0737576698707 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204370592246 0.150856017488 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802932046665 0.0645574589148 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.