Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the current era, the importance of making good decisions and their consequences on different parts of society is obvious to all the country’s citizens. However, some people believe that youngsters do not affect this kind of decision, others believe otherwise and cannot deny the influence of youths on the future of the community. I support the latter group’s idea for two main reasons, on which I will elaborate in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, it is crystal clear that the younger generations are the majority of each society and they are making the main body of a country. The youths, however, may not have critical positions in the current companies and political roles, but they will be the upcoming managers and politicians. Moreover, young people have a pivotal role in government policy and the future of society indirectly by selecting the politicians. For instance, official statistics in my country reveal that in the recent presidential election, more than 60 percent of the voters were young people between 18 to 30 years old. Therefore, the president has been elected by the youth’s votes. As a result, youngsters have a significant effect on the next 4-year policy of their country.
Another reason for this view is that the advancement of technologies and development of life quality have direct control on the awareness of society. These improvements provide a circumstance for young people to have access to a wide range of information and modern devices. Accordingly, the younger generations are more educated and knowledgeable and have more critical demands and need compared to the elder ones. The government has to pay attention to the youths’ requests since they are the true wealth of society. In world history, there are so many examples of old rules which have changed due to the protests of younger people. As a case in point, last summer, the prohibition rule of women driving in Saudi Arabia changed because of widespread requests and protests of young people.
By taking into account all the above reasons, I believe that the youths have critical effects on different parts of a country. That is because not only do they have key positions in society, but also they are more aware and push every community forward.
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- ETS integrated essay 3
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, as to, for instance, kind of, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1904.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07733333333 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79065105904 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5420832987 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 112.0 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0588235294 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23529411765 5.45110844103 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179892270049 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516443806397 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380172281274 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103362694321 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345061733303 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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