Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
A good sense of humor is one of the most important human qualities.
Every individual human in the world like to have a good sense of humor. There are several human qualities. One of the quality is a good sense of humor. Many psychologists believe that it can be considered as the significant human qualities. This quality has a lot of pros and cons aspects. Some people believe that a sense of humor made mankind powerful enough for establishing better life, there are others holding the opposite idea of this point. From my perspective, having a good sense of humor can be a necessary characteristic for people.
First of all, I would like to highlight that a good sense of humor can make a person to accept the harsh realities of life. As you know we have a lot of daily problems. Some of them we cannot solve easily and on time. A person who has a sense of humor does not become nervous because of these problems. They look the problems from a different angle and they wish that they will find the solution immediately. So tolerance is very important for people and I advocate that people who have a sense of humor endure problems easily and do not suffer because of their nervous.
Furthermore, some of us like to be calm and quite while some become angry easily. But anger is one of the most unwanted features of human beings as when they get angry. If you lack a good sense of humor, easily you could turn angry with the speeches you are listening or if something is thrown at you. For instance, you are attending a public ceremony where all of your familiar people are present and making fun of each other. Someone cracked a joke and you got hurt as you lack the sense of humor. You do not have the idea how to appreciate the joke or how to avoid the comments inflicted upon you, technically. So, as a result, you are standing alone.
To sum up, I would like to repeat the important role of a good sense of humor in our life. For living happily and enduring for problems this characteristic is irreplaceable. And happy people influence others and tend to share positive attitude. Thus, people who have a good sense of humor influence their community optimistically, too.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... to accept the harsh realities of life. As you know we have a lot of daily problem...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, look, so, thus, while, for instance, you know, as a result, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 382.0 407.700716846 94% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54712041885 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5894498795 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492146596859 0.524837075471 94% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7574682223 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.375 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9166666667 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343793371222 0.236089414692 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102578496111 0.076458572812 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865284197395 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205270351211 0.150856017488 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600904231472 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => The average readability is low. Need to improve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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