Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Submitted by ssmtariq on Tue, 07/23/2019 - 23:43

A relationship makes people go through a lot of circumstances. Personally, I believe telling truth is the most essential factor in a relationship. I believe this because of two reasons which I will explore through the following essay.

First of all, I believe lies are the mother of all sins. If a person tell a lie, then he has the probe to lie again to make his first lie established as a truth. For example, during my undergraduate studies I went to a trip with my class mates. I went to visit a nearby sea beach but visiting sea beaches was forbidden from my family because I didn't knew swimming very well. So I lied to my parents and told them that I am going to visit a nearby hilly area. On the first day, I went to practice swimming with my friends and started drowning due to high tides in the sea. My mates took me to a local hospital and they informed my family about my health condition. When I started feeling better I have talked to my parents and again lied to them saying that I have fallen from a small hill track. I was unaware of the fact that my friends already shared the details with my family. As a result, due to consistently providing fallacious information I have lost the trust of my family and later they have forbidden all of my trips that year.

Secondly, truth always wins and make relationship stronger. Sometimes it appears to be very hard to be with truth but in the long run truth always brings peace and happiness in a relationship. For instance, during my college life I had a friend named Iqbal whom I have never seen to lie. At the very beginning of our college life I used to hate him because he never assisted in manufacturing truths and hiding secrets of people. During our laboratory class, I used to copy assignments from others. Sometimes I was caught and professor used to ask me from whom I copied the tasks. I used to lie and Iqbal always revealed my duplicity eagerly to the professor. Animosity started growing in between us and I used to punish him in my ways. During examination I was befuddled with the questions set from those assignments. Finally, I have realized my faults and became a good friend to Iqbal.

In conclusion, sometimes it is tough to be with lies, in some situations it seems to be harmful to tell the truth, it could create a temporary loss to us but we should never lie. Because fallacy always emerges sins which results in shame and make good relationships broken apart. Hence, we should always give truthfulness the highest value in a relationship.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 345, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... was forbidden from my family because I didnt knew swimming very well. So I lied to m...
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Line 5, column 819, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...e questions set from those assignments. Finally I have realized my faults and became a ...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, to tell the truth

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2072.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 460.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50434782609 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69330192075 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50652173913 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 654.3 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5751571817 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6923076923 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6923076923 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130183301793 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441428721876 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492675275126 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106815896583 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483949902271 0.0645574589148 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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