Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Friendship plays an important role in our life and it always expands with making new friends over time. Personally, I believe that making new friends is very essential and we should also maintain a good relationship with our old friends. I believe this because of two reasons which I will explore through the following essay.
Firs of all, making new friends helps us to adapt with new circumstances and plots of life. Life is very dynamic, it pushes us to travel diverse stages step by step. Beginning from moms lap then kindergarten, secondary school, higher secondary school, university, then office and so on. Typically, It never stops until we keep breathing. In each and every stages of life making new friends is very important. For example, during my higher secondary school I got admitted to City College which is one of the most prestigious institute of our city. Unfortunately, none of my friends from secondary school got chance there. I started feeling lonely and began to get acquainted with other students. Within a few days I made a bunch of new friends. My loneliness had gone and I started enjoying my new life at the new institution. In addition, my new friends also helped me during my admission to university. None of my old friends from secondary school who didn't got chance at City College and admitted to some other institutes got admission into engineering universities. But many of my new friends did very well in higher secondary and helped me to do well in university admission tests. As a result, I got admitted to a reputed public university in Computer Science and Engineering.
Secondly, making new friends sometimes helps us to maintain good relationship with old friends. For instance, after completing my undergraduate study I have started working at a company and got acquainted to a doctor who works at my company to take primary healthcare of all the employees. Overtime, I became friend with the doctor at my company and shared him about one of my old school friend who was struggling to get a job. My old friend was also a doctor and after listening to me my new friend at work referred my old friend to a pharmacutical company. In the end, my old friend got the job.
In conclusion we should always keep making friends and maintain relation with ole
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'stages'' or 'stage's'?
Suggestion: stages'; stage's
...dynamic, it pushes us to travel diverse stages step by step. Beginning from moms lap t...
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Line 3, column 954, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...y old friends from secondary school who didnt got chance at City College and admitted...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1905.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 395.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82278481013 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82348972296 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463291139241 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.9 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1657504387 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8260869565 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1739130435 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205669517388 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783498255857 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636718001822 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155075110871 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332681762301 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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