Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.

Submitted by harvey on Sun, 09/15/2019 - 12:56

<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">It is more and more important for people to

reduce their living expenses because of inflation. Some people may suggest

buying the new technology products less frequently is a good potion. I hold

that finding a roommate that can share the expenses is a better choice.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">Finding a roommate that can share the

expenses means people can reduce living expenses dramatically. Living expenses

can be reduced dramatically because house rents account for a huge part of

people’s life expenses. Having a roommate to afford rents together means people

only need to pay fifty percent of whole rents. On the contrary, money paid for

new technology products is little compared to rents. Even if people buy the new

technology products less frequently, their living costs may only drop five

percent. For example, I had to pay five hundred dollars for the rents for house

per month. I always needed to borrow money from others to cover my living

expenses. I found a roommate that can share the fee later, so I only need to

pay two hundred and fifty dollars per month. Two hundred and fifty dollars are

a large amount of money to me given that my total expenses were six hundred

dollars.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">Finding a roommate that can share the

expenses is a quick way to reduce living expenses. It is easy because there are

a lot of people want to find a roommate for the same purpose in society.

Quickness is crucial because the faster people find a roommate means more money

that people save. In contrast, people may buy new technology twice a year. It

is very inefficient for people to reduce life costs. Chinese people is a case

in point. In 2018, China Daily conducted a survey on why people want to find a

roommate as a mean to reduce costs targeting six thousand citizens from several

first-tier cities nationwide. Over eighty percent of the respondents rated that

they can easily find a roommate as one of the top three answers. They also

listed the following reasons: they can have a lot of ways to find a roommate

like Internet, advertisements and so forth. Most of them succeeded in finding a

roommate in one week. They saved at least six hundred dollars from this

efficiency.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">Finding a roommate that can share the

expenses means you have a monitor to control your money. Roommates become

monitors because they need people to pay their duty fees every month. A monitor

is vital since it is very difficult for people to control their own people. By

contrast, through shopping for less expensive food and cooking at home cannot

achieve that goal. For instance, my father had a roommate when he started

working in 24. His roommate always pay attentions to my father’s money given

that he wanted to make sure that he did not have to pay rents alone by the end

of the month. With the help of the roommate, my father spent little money on

things unnecessary and greatly reduced the life expenses.<o:p></o:p></span></p>

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Reduce
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Suggestion: Buying
...of inflation. Some people may suggest buying the new technology products less freque...
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Suggestion: Expenses
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...ouse rents account for a huge part of people's life expenses. Having a roommate to a...
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Suggestion: Only
...to afford rents together means people only need to pay fifty percent of whole rent...
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...ents. On the contrary, money paid for new technology products is little compared ...
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...y products is little compared to rents. Even if people buy the new technology product...
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...ndred dollars for the rents for house per month. I always needed to borrow money ...
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Suggestion: Pay
...hare the fee later, so I only need to pay two hundred and fifty dollars per month...
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...Finding a roommate that can share the expenses is a quick way to reduce living expense...
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...xpenses. It is easy because there are a lot of people want to find a roommate f...
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...ople find a roommate means more money that people save. In contrast, people may bu...
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...y buy new technology twice a year. It is very inefficient for people to reduce l...
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... life costs. Chinese people is a case in point. In 2018, China Daily conducted a...
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...percent of the respondents rated that they can easily find a roommate as one of th...
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...have a lot of ways to find a roommate like Internet, advertisements and so forth. ...
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Suggestion: Roommate
.... Most of them succeeded in finding a roommate in one week. They saved at least six hu...
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Suggestion: Expenses
...Finding a roommate that can share the expenses means you have a monitor to control you...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Monitors
... control your money. Roommates become monitors because they need people to pay their d...
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Suggestion: Is
...heir duty fees every month. A monitor is vital since it is very difficult for pe...
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Suggestion: Achieve
...nsive food and cooking at home cannot achieve that goal. For instance, my father had ...
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Suggestion: Working
...father had a roommate when he started working in 24. His roommate always pay attentio...
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Suggestion: Of
...ot have to pay rents alone by the end of the month. With the help of the roommat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, at least, for example, for instance, in contrast, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2830.0 1977.66487455 143% => OK
No of words: 513.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51656920078 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75914943092 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.67209944637 2.67179642975 175% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.436647173489 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 819.0 618.680645161 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4881365629 48.9658058833 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.814814815 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.37037037037 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 41.0 4.53405017921 904% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 26.0 5.5376344086 470% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0239968910207 0.236089414692 10% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00939054357302 0.076458572812 12% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0154181692181 0.0737576698707 21% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00744398884637 0.150856017488 5% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0153419647233 0.0645574589148 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 10.9000537634 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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