Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
A fact is that the world is changing in and with speed. Everything is now accessible and instant and this comes with many possibilities. However, people may know how to use the possibilities in their favor or not, and that is the key point for a peace of mind.
An advanced technology allows new connections around the world. Speed communication, portable devices, connectivity anywhere, the changes are many. An amount of people really knows how to make their life better with technologies. That people seems to have a life without great concerns, but indeed, they just can use the developed connectivity to work in home offices, to optimize their job and home tasks. A smart person can then use the extra time that they have saved to personal enlightenment or pleasure.
Unfortunately, the blessing of someone is the curse of another. Like it or not, your job follows up to you wherever you go and some people do not know how to manage it. A person that have poor tech skills and meet up with a developed environment may not like at all the globalization. For example, grandfather is not used yet with his smartphone despite his job forces him to use one. That difficult makes him be nostalgic and regard the times where his world was just where his eyes could see it.
Satisfaction, happiness and peace of mind are not dependent of the amount or lack of tech, money and objects around you. How you deal with the situations is what makes it to be different<span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> </span>. Learn how to use the technologies in your favor is the key point for a peaceful and healthy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, really, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 280.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76785714286 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04253645191 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553571428571 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.7618861299 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.4375 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.45110844103 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18129242501 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619233341044 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530433692768 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115905091134 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374030723846 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.