Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
While some people may hold a view that in the past people were more satisfied than today's people since in modern life everything alters with a high speed. However, others may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that current people enjoy more than the past people. I personally agree with the second belief. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons which persuade me to put forward this perspective.
The first exquisite reason which gives an adherence to my outlook is that the nowadays society provides a broad range of facilities. It is lucidly obvious that there is a huge gap between the two decades ago and current's facilities. This extended equipment leads to a wide span of choices. As a result, there are various facilities which are responsible for different people with the various financial statuses, the varied working hours. According to the noteworthy, intelligence survey conducted in my country, approximately sixty-nine percent of Tehran's citizen has the access to an accountable entertainment facility to address their joy requirement. However, a decade ago, the lack of entertainment facilities could be responsible for merely twenty percent of Tehran's inhabitant.
The second fact embraced my idea is that the today's people own a holistic lean which alters the people cognition. Indeed, since they have a better understanding from surrounding, they can present a responsible perspective to flourish their satisfaction. Maybe in the past, the satisfaction was limited to some facial enjoyment such as a huge wealth. On the contrary, current people can satisfy themselves with a trivial but meaningful subject. A vivid example can be given to shed a light on the subject is my mother and my own instance. My mother has been a house-wife for forty years, her satisfaction is restricted to the solo her success in the household tasks. However, I as an architect have this opportunity to enjoy and satisfy by my friendly environment in my office. That illustrates the huge difference between the definition of satisfaction among the two generations.
Nevertheless, some people may assume that inasmuch as people in modern society have a hectic lifestyle, they do not enjoy as the past people. However, they overlook this crucial point that there is a massive alteration between the qualities of enjoyments. although in the past, people spent more time for entertainment, nowadays people's enjoyments are more qualified that can be responsible for people's demand in the short span. Actually, the quality of joy should consider more valuable than its period.
To wrap it up, based on the all aforementioned reasons, one can logically draw the conclusion that the current people are more satisfied and happy than the past people since there are lots of entertainment facilities and people's outlook and definition from the satisfaction have changed a lot, which ease the life. Moreover, nowadays people have more qualified entertainment than the past which can cover the drawbacks of the hectic lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 257, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Although
...on between the qualities of enjoyments. although in the past, people spent more time for...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'second', 'so', 'while', 'such as', 'as a result', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.243947858473 0.229887763892 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.12104283054 0.158761421928 76% => OK
Adjectives: 0.124767225326 0.0866891130778 144% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0409683426443 0.046263068375 89% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0446927374302 0.0685040099705 65% => OK
Prepositions: 0.117318435754 0.118717715034 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0167597765363 0.0351676179071 48% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.9820466948 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0223463687151 0.0309702414327 72% => OK
Particles: 0.00186219739292 0.00188951952338 99% => OK
Determiners: 0.130353817505 0.0887237588012 147% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0223463687151 0.0209618222197 107% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0130353817505 0.0139019557991 94% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3063.0 2387.08602151 128% => OK
No of words: 489.0 408.028673835 120% => OK
Chars per words: 6.26380368098 5.86048508987 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70248278971 4.48200974243 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.398773006135 0.338922669872 118% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.310838445808 0.251872472559 123% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.212678936605 0.174417080927 122% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.159509202454 0.112833075102 141% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9820466948 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501022494888 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 58.5257710101 59.2087087015 99% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6684587814 116% => OK
Sentence length: 20.375 20.5533526081 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7894139219 48.84282405 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.625 120.699889404 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 20.5533526081 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 0.644075263715 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 51.4588445808 45.7405998639 113% => OK
Elegance: 1.82882882883 1.45489161554 126% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367047150945 0.300154397459 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0831115116282 0.103427244359 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.080994703533 0.0752933317313 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.49890646477 0.497263757937 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.155534717351 0.151897553556 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143305120803 0.114077575197 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784920055841 0.0781384742642 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.367721889778 0.336927656856 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0773704021473 0.067059652881 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268671545909 0.210909579961 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585828882165 0.0618886996521 95% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8870967742 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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