There are certain considerations regarding decision making of young people, some believes that in past young people have no freedom to make own decision , some believes hat now young have more power to take important decision related to their life. I certainly agree with the statement that in past people were mostly rely on parents for important decisions of their life. My propensity for this is for following reasons.
The very first reasons in past young people were mostly dependent on their parent for financially and for living, because of dependent on parents they must obey their parents if they deny they may lost support from parents. contrary, today,s young people are hardly dependent on parents most of the youngster have part time jobs they earn enough money to support themselves so, they have more opportunities to take important decision regarding there own life.For instance, I would like to mention my own experience my parents were totally dependents on their parents so all important decisions of their life such as marriage were taken by my grand parents they have no saying in it. But i have more freedom to take my decision such as jobs, and marriage. It,s all because I am financially independent.
Moreover,the education is most significant factor which is involves in decisions making in past people were less educated and mostly they rely on someone more experience or more senior to take important decision. today,s youngster are more educated and well aware of their right, and they knows the consequences of good or bad decisions. because of social media people are update and learn from others experiences around the globe. for instance , when I decided to move united states search about the united states about the cultural values and other benefits than finally I decided to move here it,s all because of available information and education which helped me to made better decision.
To sum it up, people in this modern world specially young people are in better position to take important decisions regarding own life than past. the financially independence and education is most significant element for young people to have more decision power than past people who,s most decision were taken by their parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, well, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1884.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10569105691 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59588465213 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457994579946 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.0 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.361321584 48.9658058833 225% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 144.923076923 100.406767564 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3846153846 20.6045352989 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.5376344086 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403218601076 0.236089414692 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157839406349 0.076458572812 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110996843665 0.0737576698707 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287804359107 0.150856017488 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109668048073 0.0645574589148 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 11.7677419355 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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