Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to have a broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Now a days, we can see a lot of people with some kind of specialization. But in general people tend to have interests in multiple subjects. Some people think having broad knowledge in different subjects are more favourable. Well I believe specialization in one particualr subject is better.
First, specialization makes you a better employee. Well we see a lot of people coming from different background in a company. Some people are specialized, others are not. So let's say, if I am a manager, and I have to assign some kind of work, which needs in depth knowledge of a particular subject, I will definately go with my specialised employee. Because they have got the better understanding of thier subjects. And they will take relatively less time as compare to semi skilled employee. And at the same time their output of work will be better than that of unskilled group.
Second, Specialization provides better research output. If we comapre the research papers or some kind of inventions, we see these things are generally come from the labs of universities and R&D labs of companies. So who are these people, generally working in these labs? It will be intersting to note down that most of them have phd degrees. This means that, they are specialised in thier work. And they have capability to bring some new concepts and ideas which can chnage the world.
Third, Specialization gives you a moral boost and let you gain societal respect. Well, people in our society generally respect those who have got some higher degrees. This is because to get to this place, one needs to work very hard and for a very long period of time. And other thing is that, not a lot of people actually do such kind of higher study, so this makes them a minority and respected group. And that's why people appreciate thier work and respect with due. In return this gives a moral boost to people and they spend their life more happily.
So summing up my all points, People in our society who has got some kind of specialization enjoys a lot of things like a better employment opportunity, they are better skilled to publish thier own research papers and at the same time they are respected by the society for their skill and efforts. So in this way I believe it's better to get specialization in one subject than to have broad knowledge in different subjects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, second, so, third, well, in general, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1947.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 410.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7487804878 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73088075474 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.460975609756 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 602.1 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.7135656165 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.88 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 5.45110844103 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164888242665 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585720170192 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701392040235 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115577756668 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571710459083 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.