Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.
I am absolutely disagreed. Human needs to be busy whole of a week and, lots of benefits are behind my opinion. Spending time with family could be so boring if you have to repeat this pattern every year! I mean working during a week is a boon to humans, specially to men, to get rid of some problems which have been rised from family. Moreover, it could be so pleasure to people, to deal with variety spectra of customers and solving their problems; Actually, meeting lots of people sounds fun for human; There are several reasons to support my idea as follows:
Working is one of the essential demands of people and its role in spiritual health is indispensable. According to some academic researches and as an analogy, the relation between working and spiritual health is the same with the relation between food and survival. Were it not for working and dealing with differet people during a day, the psychological health of the society would be put in danger! So, reducing the number of working days might lead to some problems like depression, sadness, lossing hope and, the most important of all is decreasing in life expectacy. By the way, people who are to be so kind and always behave with their family well, should pay enough attention to this aspect of working's benefits.
In this world, being fast is the principle of most of the businesses and in this way, all people are busy. Closing some activities in a few days during a week, cropples the economic cycle and the global communication of the country. All activities should be current during a week to avoid economic bad cosequences and to make the country a serious assertive of progression. For instance, if banks was closed 2 days during a week more than the weekend, the international trade of the society would be lost many chances and profits.
Of cource, there might be some benefits in working just three days like spending more time for seightvisiting, more exercising etc. But, these possible benefits are nothing in comparison with bad consequences of this opinion. Admittedly, long hour working could cause other health problem like decreasing eye sight.
All in all, I am absolutely disagreed because this opinion might lead to reduce gross naional productes and even falling down in company's stocks. Moreover, thanks to working during a week, we are so healthy.
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- Integrated writing task 1 TPO 34 3
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- TOEFL T P O 26 - Integrated Writing Task 3
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 305, Rule ID: EYE_BROW[1]
Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesight'.
Suggestion: eyesight
...se other health problem like decreasing eye sight. All in all, I am absolutely disagreed...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, i mean, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1943.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8575 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6610324594 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.4657568625 48.9658058833 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.4375 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4375 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226898763269 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725515456117 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551468505674 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123708929888 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312928582872 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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