Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
It is part of human nature to create and build the thing to help us to do the tasks faster and easier. Some people think that life is easier and more comfortable today while others do not think so. Personally speaking, I completely agree to the idea that nowadays life is much easier than our grandparents childhood time due to several reasons. Today computers and automatic machines and developed transportation help people to do their tasks as easy as possible. I will elaborate more on next paragraphs.
First of all, computers make human lives easier and comfortable. Thanks to advent of the computers, people can do their shopping online and when they want, on holidays or midnight it is not important and this makes the life easier. People are able to pay their bills on their small computers, cell phones. This is a comfortable way of doing daily tasks. Computers diminish the distances between people all around the world. For example, nowadays I am able to apply for a job opportunity in another country like Canada so easily when I am leaving in China. I have the chance to talk with the professors living in various cities of Canada in a day.
In addition, automatic machines are another facility to ease human lives. Automatic machines aid people in diverse fields like agriculture, cleaning huge buildings and so on. Not only do these machines help farmers to make the producing process easier, but also they make this process much faster. There is no need for numerous people to do this kind of work and these machines do their job as well as possible. Furthermore, they do their task on time and they can do it all day in different parts because they do not become tired like humans.
All in all, it is part of life cycle that human always try to invent new things to ease life and do the tasks as fast as possible. Today life is easier than in the past owing to computers and automatic machines which are above-mentioned. Human beings like comfortable life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, well, while, for example, in addition, kind of, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 347.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7204610951 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58430911251 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49855907781 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0406549596 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.35 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221316922283 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723052867545 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584132783296 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154641190053 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696004142626 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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