Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Modern transportation and shipping has made the world a better place to live.Use specific reasons and details to explain your opinion.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Modern transportation and shipping has made the world a better place to live.

Use specific reasons and details to explain your opinion.

Transportation and shipping play a key role in creating international bussiness environment and promote the trade.Expertise in technology impacted the transportation and shipping over a period of time in a positive way. I believe that mordern transportation and shipping has made the world a better place by it's quick availability, optimized cost and simplicity.

Today, due to great network of transportation has connected almost all important places around the world which result in their quick availability. Almost any place on this earth is reachable by means of train, car, air or ship. Mordern equipments and methods supported this revolution by providing better roads and high end equipments like air traffic system, ship navigation, gps etc. For instance, a flight can be easily tracked and navigated today by their efficient radar. Hence flying them over various geographies is much more easier today.

Mordern transport system due to their quick availability has optimized the cost of travel. Today, people prefer public transport more than their own means, which leads to more savings and also lessens climate pollution. Alternate means of energy sources like electric and solar in mordern transport system is widely accepted by public and hence increased the value of public transport.

Automatic ticket purchase, live tracking of trains, buses, ships and easy navigation to places by digital maps like google maps made mordern transport and shipping system much more simple today as compared to previous times. This simplicity is widely accepted by general public and making the people lives more intelligent, smart and efficient. For instance, inclusion of metro in metro cities are more convinient means of transport as they are easily accessible.

By summarizing the above points. It is true that mordern transport and shipping has made life more easy, simplistic and effective.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 115, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Expertise
...iness environment and promote the trade.Expertise in technology impacted the transportati...
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Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... the transportation and shipping over a period of time in a positive way. I believe that morde...
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Line 1, column 202, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...tion and shipping over a period of time in a positive way. I believe that mordern transportation ...
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Line 3, column 478, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...vigated today by their efficient radar. Hence flying them over various geographies is...
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Line 3, column 529, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...g them over various geographies is much more easier today. Mordern transport system due ...
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Line 7, column 264, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
.... This simplicity is widely accepted by general public and making the people lives more intell...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, for instance, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 294.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48639455782 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89859187945 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0744119453 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.533333333 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.45110844103 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169534712783 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614674309095 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559754501254 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109781152593 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046132032969 0.0645574589148 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 10.9000537634 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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