Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Parents are the best teachers.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Parents have a very important role in their children's life. They can help their kids in so many ways: by giving them advise , being there any time they need support, by playing a good role model. However, I disagree with the statement that says that: "Parents are the best teachers". In the following paragraph I will give some reasons and example to support my opinion.
It is important to mention that many times the teaching process can be difficult. Acknowledging, that education is an important part of our life we need to understand that a teacher can do a better job teaching our kids.
First of all teachers have more experience in the teaching field. They know how to explain new concepts and they can easily captivate their attention. For example when I was in 7-th grade I had a chemistry teacher that made me love chemistry after the first class. He had a talent to captivate kids and to engage them in the class.
Second, if the teacher explains and captivates the students attentions, he can give them appropriate assignments and the student will enjoy doing the work. For example, when I was in school I loved to do my homework.
In conclusion, teachers are a better choice because they have more experience, they are specialized in their field and they can easily captivate our children attention and motivate them to do their best.
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.230188679245 0.229887763892 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.17358490566 0.158761421928 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0679245283019 0.0866891130778 78% => OK
Adverbs: 0.022641509434 0.046263068375 49% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.120754716981 0.0685040099705 176% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0830188679245 0.118717715034 70% => OK
Participles: 0.0264150943396 0.0351676179071 75% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.75345164805 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0301886792453 0.0309702414327 97% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0867924528302 0.0887237588012 98% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0301886792453 0.0209618222197 144% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0188679245283 0.0139019557991 136% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1370.0 2387.08602151 57% => OK
No of words: 236.0 408.028673835 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.80508474576 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.48200974243 87% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.309322033898 0.338922669872 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.25 0.251872472559 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.186440677966 0.174417080927 107% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.122881355932 0.112833075102 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75345164805 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563559322034 0.524397521467 107% => OK
Word variations: 54.7429035717 59.2087087015 92% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6684587814 63% => OK
Sentence length: 18.1538461538 20.5533526081 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6683155492 48.84282405 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.384615385 120.699889404 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1538461538 20.5533526081 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.615384615385 0.644075263715 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 43.1538461538 45.7405998639 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.07142857143 1.45489161554 74% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283758153022 0.300154397459 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0913587684812 0.103427244359 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0876681032551 0.0752933317313 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.562792722997 0.497263757937 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.194596342651 0.151897553556 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115143077726 0.114077575197 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0870709985366 0.0781384742642 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.190741169277 0.336927656856 57% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0719779453364 0.067059652881 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169864435886 0.210909579961 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693623401301 0.0618886996521 112% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 13.6433691756 66% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.