In recent few years, schools have changed a lot and some of them required parents to involve in children’s education. Personally, I think these days parents are more integrated with their kid’s education. I feel this way because of three reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, pre-schools required a family member to bring or take the child. Parents must receive the daily sheet from the school. What the child has done this day? Therefore, parents know everything about their kid. A good example is my daughter’s school. My wife and I have to share commuting to her school in order to have this connection with the school. Also, I remember one day that I read from the daily sheet that my daughter talked about me in her group and how I am a superhero. In fact, that helps me to play with her more and more. If I had not commuted every day to her school, I would not have learned about that story.
Schools have different activities for families rather than just attending the end of semester ceremony. In other words, in past schools used to required from parents to come at mid-semester only. However, nowadays parents are required to attend more activities such as attending a presentation, play shows, and soccer game. A good example is that my little brother’s school. Last month my father had to go to his school three times to attend his matches. In comparison to my school when I was a child, I did not remember that I saw my father in school at all.
Frankly speaking, it is true that some schools still have not changed until today. However, with our modern life and the level of education that we have, parents are aware of how it is important to involve in children’s lives. Not only parents do that, but also the workplaces do. For example, when I signed my contract, the HR told me you have the opportunity to take some excuse hours if you will go to your daughter’s school.
All in all, I totally agree that parents are more involved nowadays in children’s education. This is because schools required from parents to grab their children. Also, schools required parents to attend different activates and a lot of companies give sick leaf for parents if they are required to attend their child schools.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, frankly, however, if, so, still, therefore, for example, i feel, i think, in fact, such as, in other words, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1898.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 399.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75689223058 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74197605262 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49373433584 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 578.7 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4971651009 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.92 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.96 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.88709677419 307% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242679318088 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816015015229 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672190768614 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166741661723 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644500232122 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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