People are spending their life with many different kinds of activities. Life has
different sorts of dimension like work, family, and such like; which confronting
people on a daily basis. They try to manage various responsibilities in order to be
much more effective in their life however, this situation leads them to do very
few things right. I fell this way for two reasons which I will explore in the
following essay.
First, doing many different things needs much more time. (first, involving with
wide variety of works is time consuming). As we know each work takes specific
time for doing, while if we couldn't spend enough time, the work couldn't be done
completely. for example, I remember that when I was student in my university I
had to do some work such as studying, working part time job and attending to
music class. I had a lot of work to do but not enough time though I had to stop
working as I should pass my exam so I couldn't do different things because of
limited my time my limited time.
for engagement to several activities, an individual requires physical and mental
preparation. It means that the better someone prepared, the better his works
accomplished.My own experience is a compelling example of this. I had two jobs
one is my basic job in the office and other is my second job in evenings in the
restaurant as a waitress. This circumstances led to my extreme mental and
physical tiredness which had jeopardized both of my carrier due to my bad
performance.
In conclusion, I strongly agree with the statement which when people are busy
doing so many different things, they do very few things well. For two reasons.
First, lake of enough time. Second, physical and mental preparation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 37, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
People are spending their life with many different kinds of activities. Life has differen...
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Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... in the following essay. First, doing many different things needs much more time. first, inv...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
... different things needs much more time. first, involving with wide variety of works ...
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Line 9, column 29, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...s specific time for doing, while if we couldnt spend enough time, the work couldnt be ...
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Line 9, column 65, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
... we couldnt spend enough time, the work couldnt be done completely. for example, I rem...
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Line 10, column 13, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
..., the work couldnt be done completely. for example, I remember that when I was stu...
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Line 11, column 47, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... do some work such as studying, working part time job and attending to music class. I ha...
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Line 13, column 39, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
... working as I should pass my exam so I couldnt do different things because of limited...
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...e of limited my time my limited time. for engagement to several activities, an in...
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Line 17, column 14, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: My
...red, the better his works accomplished.My own experience is a compelling example ...
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Line 23, column 10, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...nt which when people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well. F...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 299.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86287625418 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75637638304 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548494983278 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.7519542527 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5294117647 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5882352941 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.53405017921 485% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265043385563 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884854688693 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139537925949 0.0737576698707 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0790883325649 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113313376324 0.0645574589148 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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