Do you agree or disagree with the following statements？ Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As the rhythm of modern life is faster and faster, many people commonly feel they are buried with so many different things both in workplace and family. This gradually became the pretext for people who succeed in doing nothing. From my perspective, though it is challenging to succeed in all fields, failure in everything you did should not be contributed to being busy with many different tasks.
Firstly, the main reason why people fail to perform well is that they cannot make reliable arrangement of their time. Though it seems that people are faced with plenty of matters, actually most of them can deal with one or two task at a time. In that way, if people make a carefully crafted plan, keep doing things one after another, without procrastination, it could be really easy for them to make it. Take those famous entrepreneurs for instance. Jack Ma, the founder of Alibaba, one of the biggest electronic commerce company, leads a hectic life full with meetings and documents. However, he is not only a successful business man but also a encouraging speaker, having great influence on the growth of youth. How could he make it? If people see his schedule, they can find the answer--the clear plan and great executive ability contribute to his success.
Moreover, there are so many things people need to do on a superficial level, nevertheless, those necessary and meaningful make up only small proportion. As is said in The Shawshank Redemption, busy living, busy dying. People seldom think about reconsider the importance of the things, filter out those significant and delete some meaningless arrangements. If people can set up a clear goal and endeavor to achieve it, they can make wise choice and finally own success.
Granted, life is filled with uncertainty, thus no one can keep following his or her own schedule without change. However, if people are self-descipline enough and keep positive attitude towards life, cherishing their own time, they can overcome the difficulty and finally make it.
In conclusion, busyness is never an excuse of failure. If you arrange your time properly and choose those really necessary for you to do, you definitely become succeed in most of your things.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...e commonly feel they are buried with so many different things both in workplace and family. Th...
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Line 1, column 275, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'succeeding'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: succeeding
...y perspective, though it is challenging to succeed in all fields, failure in everything yo...
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Line 1, column 376, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...d not be contributed to being busy with many different tasks. Firstly, the main reason why ...
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Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'task' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'tasks'.
Suggestion: tasks
...y most of them can deal with one or two task at a time. In that way, if people make ...
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Line 3, column 645, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...only a successful business man but also a encouraging speaker, having great influ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, really, so, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1849.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02445652174 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74692510468 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589673913043 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0749232795 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3157894737 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3684210526 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05263157895 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27042449425 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723230077205 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579785261805 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151151098272 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577321273624 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.