It is tempting to think that the price of technological devices will fall a few months after they are available, hence waiting instead of buying them right away will be a wiser choice. Nevertheless, from my perspective, the experience of having the latest digital devices is incomparable, so that it is better to own them as soon as they are released.
On the one hand, if one chooses to wait every time he or she is considering buying a new device, then the chance is high that one will always end up using out-of-date products and missing the opportunity to experience a better and easier life. Apple company, for instance, update their product and release their new creations every September. Generally, the price of a new version of iPhone will not fall until another generation is created, which means one could only gain a discount when he or she is willing to use the old iPhone. The benefits that come from the improvement design or the advancement of technology are not available for people who always wait.
On the other hand, waiting could not only cause one to miss the superior and smoother experience of the new device, but also cause one to have a worse experience of using the old equipment. It is commonly acknowledged that, apart from the hardware, the software of a device is also essential to the user's experience. As the hardware is continually being updated, the software will have may adjustments to suit these changes as well. As a result, the old device will not work as perfect it used to be due to the new software. For example, my old laptop cannot work with Windows 10, and when I have to repair my laptop, it is incredibly problematic as few fix shops could deal with the old version of the Windows system.
Admittedly, sticking to old digital devices will save money. However, with the help of insurance products such as Apple care plus, which could help you update your iPhone with low prices or even free, now it is possible to buy products that are both new and cheap.
In summary, it is more beneficial and smart to purchase digital products once a new version is available to the market. Nowadays, people could have better user experience at a relatively low price and do not need to worry about the flaws of old products.
- At some universities, students take part in making decisions about the issues that affect daily life of everyone on campus such as how many hours the libraries should be open each day or what kinds of food should be served in the cafeteria. But at some un 73
- At some universities, students take part in making decisions about the issues that affect daily life of everyone on campus such as how many hours the libraries should be open each day or what kinds of food should be served in the cafeteria. But at some un 73
- Claim No act is done purely for the benefit of others Reason All actions even those that seem to be done for other people are based on self interest Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim a 75
- 7.Some young people are free in the evenings or have days off at school, which way can bring them the most benefit?1)to accumulate work experience by a part-time job or volunteering in a community2)learning to play a sport3)learning to play a musical inst 80
- As a student of university that has a long break between university semesters, the university requires all students to do one of the following for one month during the break: 1、Students must take a course on the subject that has no direct connection to 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in summary, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1871.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6775 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62413676282 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.7013574988 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.733333333 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 5.45110844103 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171715245219 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573124827718 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400849826271 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988103810764 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205425714025 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.