Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Some people say that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In current times, people incline to get access to internet more than the past, owing to the advanced and dominant technological age we are living. For many, this development has brought lots of advantages and benefits, whereas some reckon that internet also has awful influences on individuals. From my perspective, the outcomes of internet are both positive and negative. Hence, I am going to discuss several specific and meticulous reasons in this essay.
On the one hand, everyone has been provided variety of disparate information of the great worth. Since there are more than one trillion terabyte of documents existing on the internet, each person will be gratified fully with the miscellaneous helpfulnesses. Specifically speaking, internet is an available companion for the ones who are getting educated by themselves, which means self-study, with just fast and convenient manipulation. Consequently, with the amazing advent of the useful supports from the internet, everybody could be a professional expert in almost every majors and professions. Additionally, internet searching is essential for travellers to understand more the places before taking a visit, as it accommodates with countless details. For the people who are deeply into learning about new cultures and customs of countries from all over the world, internet is employed in order to meet fully the curiosity, as well as the desire of broadening their horizons.
On the other hand, in fact, the proportion of committing a crime through computers has been increased, since the internet has opened a good opportunity to perform bad purposes. A new kind of criminal called "Hacker" has been created so that they can steal personal data and money, spread virus, as well as transmit untrustworthy gossips and unfounded criticism, which are disadvantageous for the users, as they might be stuck into receiving exasperating consequences. Moreover, every man should be cautious with the fake news, advertisements or perplexed tricks on the internet, much as they may suffer from giving aids and being accomplices for cruel intentions.
To sum up, undeniably, internet is one of the greatest ehancements in technology, which assembles a tremendous number of interests for humans, and contains unhelpfulnesses harming people.
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...nts or perplexed tricks on the internet, much as they may suffer from giving aids...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, hence, if, may, moreover, so, well, whereas, in fact, kind of, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1951.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49577464789 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19528515981 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633802816901 0.524837075471 121% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.6204337727 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.357142857 100.406767564 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3571428571 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 5.45110844103 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18831623573 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606280699791 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0242703608942 0.0737576698707 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975189219794 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473251687171 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 11.7677419355 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 58.1214874552 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 10.9000537634 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.01818996416 126% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 86.8835125448 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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