Agree or disagree?
Some people say that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems.
The advancement of technology happening at a very fast pace which alters human lives. one of this development is the internet. It provides a lot of valuable information for people. Views differ when it comes to the effect of this information on our life. In my point of view, the internet's advantages are more compare to its disadvantages.
First, the internet creates a great source of information for a group of people that are located in remote zones. Today the connection of the internet exists in all areas and because of that many students have access to the internet. this access provides many sources of knowledge for students in remote villages. They can easily search and find any books and explanations and study them. as we know, in the remote regions sometimes there was not a good teacher or a good source of a book for the student to study them. The internet removed this obstacle and provide essential information especially for these areas.
Second, the internet contains much knowledge about all sorts of science. Many renowned professors share their idea on their websites. Students can use this idea and information to improve their knowledge or enhance their weakness in a certain course. For example, Coursea is a website contain many tutorials in different areas. instructors of these tutorials are knowledgeable professors and all of them are working in top universities. These courses are like a classroom. Students can assign to the courses, watch these courses and learn more. These courses contain assignments and it exactly stimulates a classroom with a teacher.
Third, the internet helps us to understand news around the world faster compare to the past. In the past, it takes a few days to newspaper publish the happening event around the world. However, nowadays with the internet, there are programs like Tweeter and Instagram which cover all events happening recently around the world. For instance, if there is a war happen in the middle east we can find out about it since all of the people talk about it on Tweeter and Instagram.
To make a long story short, the internet gave us much crucial information due to the mentioned paragraphs. It is obvious that internet engendered copious issues but its merits are much more.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, third, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1890.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71855229506 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518518518519 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9660937565 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.6 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.12 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76 5.45110844103 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183382172516 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527522553895 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592248548411 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101502240852 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415020464797 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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