Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Teachers are the most honourable person in our society and they are the person who develops the cultural value in a society. In my opinion, I think teachers are now less appreciated by society. There are several reasons with my point of view which are described below.
To begin with, nowadays teachers are less respected by society. In the past time when most of the people in society were illiterate and they depend on the teachers for making any decision. Because they are the only person the illiterate people can trust. For example, in the past when the manor of a state asking the illiterate farmer to signature a document. The farmer did not trust the manor at all and they discuss with the teachers who are the only loyal person of that state. After discussing the farmer make a decision to about those papers. Thus, teachers at that time are more respected and trusted by the people.
Second, the salary of the teacher is very low. In the past, the salary was average with social standards. But, the present days the wage of the teachers are not much increasing. For example, in our country, Bangladesh salary of the primary teachers is so low that recently for increasing the wages they summon a stick. After, one month striking the government agree with the proposal of the teacher. I think this phenomenon is shocking because they are not properly appreciated by their potentiality.
Third, sometimes teachers also assault by the student which is really terrible for our society and if this occurrence happens more and more in the future society will lose the guardian. For instance, in my childhood, I saw that in a group when conflict occurs between the student they solve that problem. Moreover, they make a decision within the group and every student accepts that solution. But, nowadays if the students are harassing the teacher in the public place because of they gave less grade in the exam. This kind of situation frequently happens in the college and the university.
To conclude, teachers are the guardians of society and they are like the shadow of society. If we can not appreciate their effort the society will lose the most loyal person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, really, second, so, third, thus, for example, for instance, i think, kind of, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85522788204 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47219877388 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461126005362 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 568.8 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7647305929 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7391304348 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2173913043 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69565217391 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230116973111 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069310272939 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389300220443 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135428909264 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180005738895 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.