Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Telephone has greater influence on people’s lives than
television has.
Since the beginning of time, human beings have always strived to improve their living standards and bring more convenience to their day to day lives.
television and the telephone are the most important mankind invention that changes all societies in all fields.
they even changed human beings from day to day behaviors.
The two of them are the door to the modernity.
I personally believe that both of them are important as much as another
but on the other side, the invitation of the telephone made a big communication revolution that literally chang the word.
Thus we could agree with the above sentences that said the telephone is more influential than television.
I will explain my point of view in 2 following reasons.
-First and foremost let me point out how so difficult life was before the telephone.
People in distance were worried about each other or would miss each other without any telecommunications.
it is made us think that, before the telephone, life was like you couldn't get in touch with someone even very important to you, for days, month or even years.
In my opinion, it's like torture. we all need to speak to someone who we love.
As a personal experience when I was a kid my father worked in another city and we did not have telephone and my mother was always worried about my father and she always tried to find some way to contact with him.as soon as we got the telephone everything got better.
-The second reason that I would like to bring here is how the invention of the telephone changed the world, it was an evolution of modernity.
After the telephone, everything got better and all societies (especially the west countries) found a way to the world of technology.
humans found a way to telecommunications and they enjoyed it a lot but it wasn’t enough for them. they tried to progress this technology to make life easier as possible. I personally think that the invention of the telephone is the main door to what we call the new age.
Now, everyone has a personal cellphone in their pocket or bags and life is easier.
-To make a long story short, I believe the telephone is one of the most important human being inventions.it made life easier and more interesting.
The phone was like a source of inspiration for modern inventors.
For those who wanted to make the world better and a modern place, For young people and new ideas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Television
...convenience to their day to day lives. television and the telephone are the most importan...
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Suggestion: They
...t changes all societies in all fields. they even changed human beings from day to d...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...olution that literally chang the word. Thus we could agree with the above sentences...
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Suggestion: It
... other without any telecommunications. it is made us think that, before the telep...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...before the telephone, life was like you couldnt get in touch with someone even very imp...
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Suggestion: We
...ears. In my opinion, its like torture. we all need to speak to someone who we lov...
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Suggestion: Humans
...ound a way to the world of technology. humans found a way to telecommunications and t...
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Suggestion: They
...lot but it wasn't enough for them. they tried to progress this technology to ma...
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ess this technology to make life easier as possible. I personally think that the i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, thus, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1982.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74162679426 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7248625294 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502392344498 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6939021116 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0909090909 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.13636363636 5.45110844103 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.53405017921 441% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111536194759 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0281505828804 0.076458572812 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304626083183 0.0737576698707 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0297717900446 0.150856017488 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314592125162 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.