Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
Since the beginning of the time, human being has always strived to improve their living standards and bring more convenience to their day-to-day lives.
Throughout history, education has played a pivotal role in all societies. Today’s human brain function is more complicated than the past. our life plan changed and this change has a direct impact on our behavior specially children behaviors. Young people are like a whiteboard every little change affects them. l agree with the sentences above but in some cases I saw completely different behavior. In modern life they are rare but undeniable. I will explicate my point of view in 2 outstanding reasons.
First and foremost point I would like to bring here is with internet emergence all human being sources changed. Today, Google and the other explorer are the only source to answer our questions. In my opinion parental dependency is gone and internet dependency takes the place. dependence on something is in our DNA. we can’t live without spiritual and material dependence and this is why we have a lot of internet-addicted. I want to bring here a simple example as illustrating, in the past, if one wants to make some traditional food he/she asked his/her mother and she gave them all her experience but now everyone will take the recipes from google.
The second important point is most modern-day parents’ work out of the home. In the past, most mothers were a housewife and the kid had a very deep emotional bond with their mother because technically in early childhood their mother was their only friend and teacher. When the women started to work outside the home the deep emotional bond improved and become a reasonable emotional connection. they love each other as much as past but their dependency is more reasonable and in this situation, undeniable separation is easier.
To wrap it up and make a long story short, I believe it is very important that we play our best role in society and family. we must reduce emotional excesses and stay stable in our line. The parents must prepare their children for society and decrease dependency is one of the most important preparations. In modern-day we need independence and strange people those who have healthy family dependency.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, in my opinion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1901.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05585106383 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81191238014 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582446808511 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.5724408053 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4090909091 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 5.45110844103 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217282934195 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522915845482 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470331853931 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106728689463 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0145544060952 0.0645574589148 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.