Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People behave differently when they wear different clothes. Do you agree that different clothes influence the way people behave? Use specific examples to support your answer.
Since the beginning of the time, the human being has always strived to improve their living standard and bring more convenience to their day-to-day lives.
Throughout history, the coating has played a prominent role in all societies.
Especially, in our modern societies with a variation of occupations, clothes are one of the most important parts of human identity. Every people in the specific job have specific character and behavior and for sure have a particular style. we use to see the lawyer in a suit and ties. but I disagree with this statement that clothes influence human behavior. I will explicate my point of view in the 2 following statement.
First and foremost reason that I would like to bring here that part of behavior come from human essence and the other part comes from family. The teaching and education elements are also important but not as important as the two other. when we said people would change their behavior from one clothes to another one, it is pure instability. our behavior is a reflection of what is in our mind. In another world, our behavior makes us who we are. it is understandable at a glance that if someone changes his/her behavior under the impact of clothes, he/she is not mentally healthy and should go to the psychiatrist.
The second reason is like I said before they are many elements have a direct impact on human behavior and the most important is the family. human ethics and behaviors developed in his/her early childhood but on the other hand, the impact of society is undeniable. when we enter society half of our behaviors are the reflex of our proximity and the people who we talk with. Where we work and what we do are also important, all of them has an impact on our behavior and cloths.
To wrap it up, the clothes are important and I think that our clothes are the reflection of who we are and they influence our work and our behavior. behavior is our personality and it is impossible that someone changes his/her behavior just for clothes. Unless we talk about a person with a mental problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 362.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75690607735 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61188100949 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472375690608 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 545.4 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0460524213 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.45110844103 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0953370010458 0.236089414692 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0359817717568 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406069040599 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0515102021118 0.150856017488 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525661534844 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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